Suzanne Delaney Poet Concrete

A Leaf Falls

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Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2023 at 4:11 PM Oh my. What a lovely idea Suzanne Delaney November 15, 2023 at 5:24 PM Thanks Andrea

Bill Baker November 11, 2023 at 10:05 PM Very creative poetry, SuZ. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Suzanne Delaney November 13, 2023 at 6:52 PM Thanks Bill for taking time to read and comment. Much appreciated, SuZ

Sam Scott November 9, 2023 at 7:28 AM Beautiful in it's simplicity. Impressive and inspiring idea :) (I think we will see more of these now..) Suzanne Delaney November 12, 2023 at 4:39 PM So glad you liked it, Sam……Thanks for paying me a visit:)

Christina Bowring November 7, 2023 at 3:49 PM A stunning concrete poem Suz. Visually astounding. I couldn’t do it! Looks amazing and really gives the sense of a falling leave. Very clever. Well done! Smiles to you :):) Suzanne Delaney November 8, 2023 at 11:05 AM So happy you liked it, Christina: it was fun to play with it, Hope you are enjoying Fall. Smiles to you too. SuZ

Michelle Faulkner November 1, 2023 at 12:41 PM I can't really do shape poems, so I admire how you got the lines to look just like leaves falling~ Suzanne Delaney November 7, 2023 at 3:20 AM Thanks Michelle: wasn’t sure if the shape would stay when I copied and pasted from notebook but luckily it did. Thanks for your lovely visits. SuZ

Timothy Ray October 28, 2023 at 2:02 PM ah the shape of things to come, very clever.....soon i see the wings you will birth and into the land of palm fronds.... Suzanne Delaney October 28, 2023 at 5:11 PM A palm tree would be fun to try. For you it would be a motor bike * wink

Silent One October 28, 2023 at 10:07 AM Very creative Suzanne.. Suzanne Delaney October 28, 2023 at 5:08 PM Fun to try. The subliminal prompts in my yard were overwhelming. LOL

Ink Empress October 28, 2023 at 5:35 AM How pretty is this! I still am supposed to try this. Shape poem. Yours is a creative beautiful one! You must be also an artist. Sending you light today and always Suzanne Delaney October 28, 2023 at 6:48 AM Thank you Empress: So glad you like it. Yes I dabble in mixed media And all kinds of papercrafts. Iy seriously competes with my writing but at times they complement one another. Thanks for your lovely presence here.

Paula Goldsmith October 27, 2023 at 1:22 PM What a creative write/shape. Love It... Have a great day/weekend................ Suzanne Delaney October 27, 2023 at 1:25 PM Thanks Paula: I was just playing around and my Autumn Muse took over LOL Have a wonderful weekend, too.