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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2023 4:11:00 PM

Oh my. What a lovely idea

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/15/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/15/2023 8:34:00 AM

Pretty! Love it :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/15/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thanks DD.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/13/2023 3:56:00 PM

Simple and succinct, but I'm sure it took a while to get right

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/13/2023 6:50:00 PM

Yes, Tom: a fun little game. Good to see you.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 1:42:00 PM

that's amazing, SuZ!! I loved it...how creative. Wish I'd started reading your poems sooner. Have a tremendous day, Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/13/2023 6:51:00 PM

Same here, Sara: Glad we connected today. Hugs, SuZ

Bill Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 10:05:00 PM

Very creative poetry, SuZ. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/13/2023 6:52:00 PM

Thanks Bill for taking time to read and comment. Much appreciated, SuZ

Sam Scott

Date: 11/9/2023 7:28:00 AM

Beautiful in it's simplicity. Impressive and inspiring idea :) (I think we will see more of these now..)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/12/2023 4:39:00 PM

So glad you liked it, Sam……Thanks for paying me a visit:)

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/7/2023 3:49:00 PM

A stunning concrete poem Suz. Visually astounding. I couldn’t do it! Looks amazing and really gives the sense of a falling leave. Very clever. Well done! Smiles to you :):)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/8/2023 11:05:00 AM

So happy you liked it, Christina: it was fun to play with it, Hope you are enjoying Fall. Smiles to you too. SuZ

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/1/2023 12:41:00 PM

I can't really do shape poems, so I admire how you got the lines to look just like leaves falling~

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/7/2023 3:20:00 AM

Thanks Michelle: wasn’t sure if the shape would stay when I copied and pasted from notebook but luckily it did. Thanks for your lovely visits. SuZ

Timothy Ray

Date: 10/28/2023 2:02:00 PM

ah the shape of things to come, very clever.....soon i see the wings you will birth and into the land of palm fronds....

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/28/2023 5:11:00 PM

A palm tree would be fun to try. For you it would be a motor bike * wink

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 10:07:00 AM

Very creative Suzanne..

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/28/2023 5:08:00 PM

Fun to try. The subliminal prompts in my yard were overwhelming. LOL

Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 5:35:00 AM

How pretty is this! I still am supposed to try this. Shape poem. Yours is a creative beautiful one! You must be also an artist. Sending you light today and always

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/28/2023 6:48:00 AM

Thank you Empress: So glad you like it. Yes I dabble in mixed media And all kinds of papercrafts. Iy seriously competes with my writing but at times they complement one another. Thanks for your lovely presence here.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2023 1:22:00 PM

What a creative write/shape. Love It... Have a great day/weekend................

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/27/2023 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Paula: I was just playing around and my Autumn Muse took over LOL Have a wonderful weekend, too.