A Late Note of Appreciation

Should have written this much sooner,
Now there’s just too much to say,
Even love-sick honeymooner
Wouldn’t leave his mom this way.

Last weeks all were good ones weren’t they?
No one knew what lay in store,
Easy talk as smooth as ballet
Sleep waltzed through the day and more.

I remember - were there coyotes?
Howls that laced peyote nights.
Desert air stirred pastel high notes
Cliffs that danced with ghostly lights.

Always there when ground fog lifted
By my side when shadows fell,
Guiding me when focus shifted,
Mom, you loved me, I could tell.

Tremulous now apprehension,
Something’s changing, like a spell,
Light that comes with new dimension!
Oh Mom, embrace your son’s farewell.

Brian Johnston
September 28, 2014

Poet’s Notes:
For Nancy Schilling, In loving memory of her son, Matthew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 7:48 AM
You might appreciate my poem "A New Dream" I have posted it here, it is from my book DUMMY, Hurtful and Healing Words" my book Ironicaly matches the theme of your new contest because it deals with the power of words. One chapter deals with the questioning of faith which fits with how I felt reading your first poem this morning. This poem is a fitting tribute for your friend.
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Very touchy tribute you have paid to Matthew, Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 3:09 AM
What a beautiful tribute for your friend Brian. Your rhyme sings with a perfect melody.
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