A Last Memory

*Tranquility in a field of *wafting wild flowers
Tired eyelashes feel you skip by
You tickle me with *lilting daisies
I hear you* whisper giggles in my ear
I dream I open my eyes
 You are so proud of
 your *lavender little dress...
*Dulcet happiness... 
I feel a *fragrant *splendor in the breeze
Playful curly blond hair "blissfully makes  me smile
It's getting late, my little girl, I need to say... "Good Bye!"...
                                           *
An "eloquent voice through a loudspeaker ends another day, the last one...
Lights out!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/19/2010 4:43:00 AM
Very cute! Congrats Iolanda
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:17:00 PM
A very lovely poem and I am happy it placed so well in Andrea's contest Iolanda. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely write. Very nice. Caryl
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Andrea's contest... an amazing write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:43:00 AM
Loved this beautiful gem, Iolanda!! It has made me smile again and again!! Such a winner, and so glad to see it here again! Congratulations!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:06:00 AM
An obvious choice for hig honors. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:06:00 AM
congratulations Iolanda, to use all these beautiful words in relation to a little girl is a lovely thought. well done...Margaret
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:21:00 AM
Iolanda, how surprising to see whose poems I chose tonight! And to see that you did this darling poem here, which captured both third place and my heart. Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:39:00 AM
So sweet and beautiful dear friend..much enjoyed.Im very busy lately but i try to come and read my friends,Wish i could read more..Charma
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Date: 4/13/2010 7:28:00 AM
This is sweet, it makes me smile with the thought of this cherub in her lavender dress! Good luck, Iolanda!!
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:34:00 PM
Wish all the best in the contest. I enjoyed it
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