A Landscape of Her Own

After the funeral,
the town changed its street maps,
old houses were relocated. new shops opened
in long emptied malls.

They had never shared their likes or interests,
they had not even shared an equitable life;
now she understood the changing landscape.

Before his death, the town was seen
through his own lens only;
he was ever determined
to shape her view, make her see things his way.

After this post-mortem revelation,
She recalibrated her car’s GPS:
It takes her now
to the as yet
unseen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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M  Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Congratulations on POTD Eric….Debx
Ashford Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Debs!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 4:37 AM
We realize something of curiosity has changed as we read the first two lines. Congratulations on POTD, Eric!
Ashford Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Many thanks Kim, good thoughts. Best E
Edmonds  Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 1:44 AM
Sad yet true for so many. Congratulations Eric on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Ashford Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Belle, it was a surprise!
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Nice expose of a 'controller' and the damage he wreaks. Congrats on POTD, Eric! Blessings for Sunday, Gershon
Ashford Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Gershon, obliged to you for the thoughts. Best EA
Nicole Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 7:04 PM
"he was ever determined to shape her view, make her see things his way." At times, it is perfectly okay to see things her way too. Your thoughts express this, so beautifully. Congratulations Eric, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ashford Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Thank you for the quote and kind comments Brandy. Best EA
Kitchin Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Eric, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
Ashford Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Much obliged to you Tania. All the best E
La France Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Eric, wonderful write and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Hi, thanks Constance, your input is much appreciated. Best EA.
Anaya Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Let freedom ring. Congratulations on your POTD Eric Ashford! Struck and robbed! I’ve never seen anything like that, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cwB-GEL-YkI “Welcome To Hell” 07/28/2022 did you enter it in Robert J Liguori’s contests? He loves Gotham goods! ~I Am Anaya
Anaya Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 9:13 AM
First step, enter them. Everything else I'm sure you have at your disposal :)
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Hi 'I Am Anya' the vid is slickening of course. "did you enter it in Robert J Liguori’s contests?" Nope, no idea! Cheers.
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Some people get dwarfed by others. After his death she emerged as an independent person having her own views. Great poem. Congratulations on your POTD, Eric.
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Valsa, not sure what a POTD is, but I will take it! Best EA
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on receiving honour of POTD. A deeply reflective poem - probably many women experience this turn in their lives. Best wishes ~ Mala
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Malabiks, I am honored though have never heard of this POTO thing, however that's definitely my fault ---- just got it 'poem of the day'. LOL a first for this poor scribbler! All the best EA
Sands Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 6:07 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Eric :) -
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Many thanks Anne Best EA
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Stepping out of his shadow, she now invites life to endow ~ congratulations on POTD, Eric
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Well said and good share Unseeing Seeker! Cheers EA
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May 20, 2023 at 2:01 AM
On first glance this one sounds like a got outta jail free card, but then I’m left wondering if she had a hand in his departing this world, who knows? excellently written Eric with some great metaphors , congratulations on a well deserved POTD, cheers David
Ashford Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Nicely put and insightful read Dave. Thanks mucho for the review. EA
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