A Lad Forgives His Dad

How sad it was to watch that boy, 
Who in his hands, ne’er held a toy,
Walked aimlessly, a subdued child.
He mostly trudged with his head down,
 If he looked up, it was with frown.

He took the same route every day,
which led him past a barn with hay.
the farmer childless, his wife had died
his farm his life, Nelly his bride,
was ill, to stay alive for him, she tried.

One day the boy and farmer met,
‘twas winter, close to Christmas, yet,
no feeling for this season either had.
The boy found this man to be kind,
The farmer spoke ‘bout his wife and sighed.

Come inside the old man said, warm your feet,
the boy’s tattered clothes gave him no heat.
The first thing that the farmer did, 
found a jacket rather big, a bowl of soup
he gave the boy baked bread, the soup to scoop.

They chatted till late that night, the boy told
of his dad who beat him bad, when behold,
a bright light shone outside the house,
and angel’s voices carols sang out loud,
they sang with them, one young, one old.

This story ends with love, to have, to give and get,
the boy stayed with the farmer, neither had regret.
The old man died and joined his so missed bride.
The young boy now a fine young man and wealthy too,
forgave his dad for miseries endured, when just a lad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/17/2022 4:00:00 PM
As it should be, well crafted story of this boy and his farmer. Lovely imagery and feeling.
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Date: 11/24/2022 9:12:00 PM
What an inspiring story, sweet flowing and spontaneous ! We become one with the boy and the farmer and and we see the story ending in peace and prosperity. The boy who had a miserable childhood is blessed at the end ! The one born in the manger can sense the pain caused by poverty and want. It was he who changed the fate of the boy ! Sorry, Jenny... ! I haven't responded to your poems....recently as I too am a busy housewife.
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Date: 11/13/2022 2:52:00 PM
what a very interesting story. Makes me think of Christmas and the giving spirit. as well as forgiveness
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Date: 11/10/2022 3:58:00 PM
All's well that ends well, I love your poem of a tale, Jennifer. Thanks for sharing news of those with caring. It's good for my heart to hear of those, fictional or real that share with those in need. A fine poem indeed, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/9/2022 5:10:00 AM
Jennifer, what a tale! Stories of kindness always bring a tear too my eye and yours did not let me down!! ( a good happy ending is always a winner( Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 11/8/2022 12:53:00 PM
I’m trying to figure out if this one is really sad, nope it’s definitely uplifting, and has that Christmassy happy ever after ending, a truly wonderful story/poem, hope you are keeping well Jennifer, cheers David
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Date: 11/9/2022 1:17:00 AM
I'm feeling very much better but Doc. told me not to work from nine to six either with poetry or proto our business but to take an hours break for lunch. Thank you for a lovely comment blessing my friend and. Hugs, Jennifer
Date: 11/7/2022 1:56:00 AM
Oh what a lovely poem you wrote Jennifer. It is a pity the real father does not know the meaning of love.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/7/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Victor, a very kind comment indeed - the boy was a good soul, and so was the farmer, so God brought the two of them together. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 11/6/2022 4:48:00 PM
Oh my Jennifer…. what a captivating beautiful sad and happy tale! LOVED IT!! Debx
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Date: 11/7/2022 9:13:00 AM
Hi Debx - i love the way you sign off by the way, you sound quite mysterious - I'm so glad you enjoyed it - Thank-you for your awesome comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/6/2022 3:21:00 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful story. Shows of compassion of a stranger and the forgiveness of the young man. love phyl
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Date: 11/6/2022 3:06:00 PM
Yes, anger held will damage us severely. It it a wonderful story you created here. Giving is the best thing we can do for each other, but a lesson not understood by everyone yet.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/7/2022 9:06:00 AM
To be honest i enjoy giving and who doesn't enjoy receiving a surprise or a present, but the joy in giving i somehow think surpasses the act of receiving. Thanks Duke for a lovely comment. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 11/6/2022 10:27:00 AM
. A wonderful story … though sad … it certainly has something to tell us … and it ended well - hugs
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Date: 11/6/2022 10:18:00 PM
My sunny kind hearted friend thank you for your so relevant comment hugs an blessings Jennifer
Date: 11/6/2022 6:17:00 AM
A sad story Jennifer with a happy ending, so glad they made up and brought closure to them both. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2022 9:37:00 PM
Thanks Tom the boy eventually grew up with love and stability and was able to forgive his father.. Glad you enjoyed. Tom. Blessings Jennifer
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