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A Knock At His Door

a knock at his door
  signal of war
he knows no more

arrive at the line
  cigarette kills the time
silence jars his mind

bullets float past his head
  he fancies himself dead
meadow's splattered blood-red

he chokes, gags and he runs
  falls to the ground, done
glorious victory, hard-won

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/29/2021 7:05:00 PM
I was always interested how soldiers in the second world war called cigarettes 'coffin nails.' They were a head of their time. Fine bit of poetry my friend. Stay frosty.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/30/2021 9:08:00 AM
Yup. They knew what 'nails' those cigarettes really were. ~ Coughin'

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