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A Kittens Forgiveness

Oh Lord forgive the dogs They really meant no harm We were playing in the kitchen Like we were on a farm The dogs they got a little rough And soon we were no more 4 little kittens so full of fun Were now lying on the floor The boys came in the kitchen They gave a cry of dispair They picked us up and brought Us in and layed us on the chair 4 little kittens our lives were cut so short The dogs they didnt mean it They were playing and we got caught We are now up in heaven Sitting on Grampies lap He'll look after us But first he needs a nap So dry your eyes and blow your nose There is no need to cry Cause we are looking down on you boys So high up in the skies......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/25/2016 7:19:00 PM
SEAN, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/15/2012 1:36:00 PM
This was a pleasant and touching poem Sean.Welcome in PSoup!:) oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:55:00 AM
Very touching. I love animals too, but cannot write about them with the compassion you use ... so genuinely sweet, the magic of your words. Welcome to poetrysoup, honored to be your friend
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:14:00 AM
Thanks to all who have commented this was my first poem and written for a small service in the back garden after my dog had killed 4 of our kittens last Sunday, my children were very upset as they were the ones who found them. So many thanks for your warm welcome
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Date: 9/15/2010 6:29:00 AM
Great rhyme and rhythm in this one..Excellent topic with great meaning behind it...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Wecome to soup...I hope that your stay is long with many more great post like this one and that you enjoy reading all the gifted writers on this site..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2010 12:02:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your sweet creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy your stay on site.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck..with luv..
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Date: 9/14/2010 7:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sean. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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