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A Kite In Turbulent Wind

Funny when the marionette turns the table on the puppeteer 
Pull the kite down or release the string so the turbulent wind takes it?




When one line is not enough Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One 
Date written and posted: 06/02/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Line!
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Great verse, Edward, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Eve!:-) I appreciate it...
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with these cleverly written two lones.
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words, Susan!:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Makes the mind twist in the wind! Nice! Congrats, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thanks, Kim!:-) I'm very pleased you liked the poem...
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 8:09 AM
- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise!
George   Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:12 AM
A two line masterpiece, Edward... Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Elaine! Much appreciated:-)
One Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 6:24 AM
This is very clever.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Thank you so much for placing me in your contest, Silent One!
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