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A Kiss Under the Mistletoe

You saw me from across the room
beside an open door.
Your smile erased all of my gloom
and touched me to the core.

The mistletoe tied in a bow,
your kiss that caused my cheeks to glow!
The mistletoe, the mistletoe,
sweet start of something soon to grow. . .

Then on a most romantic ride
as we sat hand in hand,
you asked me if I'd be your bride
in Winter's Wonderland.

The one-horse sleigh took us away
where snow swirled down, then gleaming lay.
The one-horse sleigh, the one-horse sleigh!
My fondest dream took hold that day.

We snuggle by a crackling fire
here at the winter's end.
No other lover could inspire
me more than my best friend.

The warm fireplace, your angel face
which softly now my fingers trace!
The warm fireplace, the warm fireplace
shows love aglow as we embrace.


*This is actually called a Trijan Refrain, but it's very similar to quatrains.
11/26/13 for Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Kiss Under the Mistletoe Poetry Contest.
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A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS on having a top win in the kissing Mistletoe contest... Love LINDA
Macfarlane Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Love this sweet romantic write Andrea. congrats on your fine win! Hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations Andy, it's been so long since I've been here. xx
Gorelick Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Dreamy my dear. Congrats..
Bateson Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:42 AM
So romantic.. Loved it.
May Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win Andrea.
Gasun Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 8:16 AM
My warmest congratulations on your well-deserved top win my dearest friend Andrea! Hugs and cheers! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:22 AM
I liked "The warm fireplace, the warm fireplace", and the meaning behind it, congrats on the top win, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Congrats Andrea.......Seren
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:38 PM
I missed this contest somehow - many congrats Andrea this is so romantic:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. A Fav.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:25 PM
congratulations Andrea you did it agai, well done ,keep em comin" :o)
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:06 PM
You have written your name in gold,to every poem you penned there is a crown; congrats on the great win Andrea...huggs
Phookan Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 6:21 AM
Reading one of the sweetest romances here. Andrea, I so wish this to be true,, under the mistletoe. What's happening? one can see so much love all around this winter season:) xoxo...
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry. Send me the definition of the form so I can try one Andie, please. Light & Love
Harper Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Lovely choice of setting for a kiss, Andrea, sure hope you have a lovely Christmas
Jackson Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 12:24 PM
Lovely sentimental poem. Full of warm images. Best wishes Linda x
Zerbst Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Ah, so impeccably phrased. I see a handful of similarities to my mistletoe poem but this is written in such a sweet and meaningful way. Positively outstanding!
Austin Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Very romantic stuff. SSSSSSMOOOOOCH! Then there is this one - She wouldn't kiss me in the canoe so I paddled her back. Hardy ho, ho, ho. Love, daver
Deschler Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Another romantic poem for the Christmas season! I love the rhyming in this one! Really great work, Andrea! I wish you good luck in this contest, as well!
Fisher Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Your poem's a wonderful romantic ride. The mistletoe really did its job-yeah!
Ellison Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:27 PM
You are a true romantic at heart Andrea! Loved it, Jack xox
Chircop Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 4:29 PM
You got me singing along this beautiful poem..I loooove this.So Christmasy it is.
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 4:09 PM
The way you write, one tends to think that it is always true. That each romantic embrace and kiss is a memory of you. Love the love and many sappy returns. Peace. :)
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