A Kiss

with the same passion of dawn i want to linger on the edges ....of lips

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/16/2021 7:25:00 PM

Remarkable! Five sharp lines that exude sensuality. Best wishes, Brian

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2019 6:35:00 AM

For sure!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2019 10:31:00 AM

thanks Kim... :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2019 2:46:00 PM

- Take your time ... and enjoy it :) - Very sweet, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2019 6:10:00 PM

i always savor my thoughts my friend... hugs :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/28/2019 1:30:00 PM

Hummm let me think about this for a minute, this is a good one because kissing is the best!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2019 6:10:00 PM

keep thinking and you can linger in the thoughts of a kiss my friend.... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/28/2019 1:14:00 PM

Now that's a kiss, my friend ~ <3

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2019 1:19:00 PM

Thank you. I had a whole poem and my granddaughter shut my computer off so I just scribbled something to feel less defeated by a 2 year old :). Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 12:22:00 PM

Good morning again my friend. The passion of dawn does heighten the sense and the desires as does you beautiful poem that is the best way to start a day.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2019 12:40:00 PM

Good morning my friend. I penned a nice long poem and my granddaughter shut the computer off. I penned something just to feel better about it :) hugs