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A Journey in Motion

I lace my shoes 
tight around trembling feet.
Morning fog drifts over the edges of the road and I stepped into the chill.

Each pace is a heartbeat, each breathes a quiet prayer.
The way extends beyond sight, its outlines softening into mist, yet I move unwavering.

Memories press like weights, old doubts whisper at my back but the wind lifts my chest, and the horizon bends
toward a soft- stubborn hope.

Rocks bump my soles the sun sears at noon and shades cling to my sides.
Yet the rhythm is steady and true
drags me over pain.

Young laughter takes through the air.
I feel it deep within my bones
a gentle reminder: running is more than distance; 
each step is patched together.

The final mile arrives
 legs scream, lungs ablaze
the heart remembers why it started, 
why it runs and pushes forward still.

I move across
not for glory and not for cheers
but for the life each tread
sewed from scattered pieces
into something complete.

The road behind me hums with echoes of effort,
each heartbeat a peaceful success
and every sigh a victory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/20/2025 4:32:00 PM
wow, amazing. Having been a runner for 20+ years, I can relate to your poem. Your poem triggered memories of 5K and 10K races run in blustry winter days, my legs screaming, my lungs ablaze...but the finish line. You captured it magnificently in the last three lines. You continue to amaze me. Faving. hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/20/2025 1:30:00 PM
Best warmest wishes!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/20/2025 1:35:00 PM
Thanks!

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