A Housewife Unmasked

By day she goes about
the weary business of her dreary life:
a housekeeper, bookkeeper, shopper, chef,
   chauffer for two active teens, and 
hostess of her husband’s dinner parties
                                is she.

In the middle of her day    
        she naps,         
for in the night. . . 

when her work-obsessed spouse
              soundly slumbers
and the kids at last     are fast asleep,
she goes into the darkness
                                     of the woods              
behind her house.

The mask of this woman
falls without a sound 
                     to the leaf strewn ground.
She raises her face to the moon.
               In its light, the stripes
                         of a tigress are revealed!
Her legs feel strong and limber.
That ferocious appetite 
                 for something that she stifles
                                                       flees away
as 
                    she
                                       runs.

Among the pines and midst the sounds
       of the woodland’s crepuscular creatures
she runs           and runs           and runs.
She is running after something 
                she cannot put a name to.

She’s a good woman.
She would never use a bar or night club
                                                             as her jungle.

Now -  with her tigress face -
    swift, stealthy, and strong -
            but above all,
                  not beholden to any  body
she is simply       free            to be.

After an hour of running, 
           the mask of the  housewife
is restored.
Then she collapses, exhausted on her  bed,
           where she dreams refreshing dreams -
which are necessary - 
                              for tomorrow
she begins again
                   the weary business
                                               of her dreary life.


10/26/2014; Now used for Skat's A poem you are proud of #3 Poetry Contest
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Thomas Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 3:12 PM
If only this were possible. What a wonderful ride! You took my mind away for a minute :) Thanks Andy
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Ah, the unshackled life of an unmasked housewife. Fine piece of writing, Andrea. A Souper 7 for sure. You just write so so good. I really enjoyed the adventure of running in the woods w/you. But you are too fast for this old lion to keep up with. A lovely poem. Ty for sharing. Much love to you.
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 4:49 AM
Wow another amazing poem penned by none other!!!! You are poetry personified my friend! Congrats on another fine placement
A  Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Andrea, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
Ward Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Your poem lived up wonderfully to its title, Andrea. Julia, xx
Irisha Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Very nice. I imagined myself running with her. Enjoyed.
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:22 PM
The format is all engulfing and the subject matter emotionally exhausting. Another immaculate effort.
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 5:13 PM
I see so much struggle and frustration here! The structure is captivating.
Sirak Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Captivating! Such imagery you reveal as the inner spirit releases the chains of life and soars.
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Ah yes we all have an animal spirit as well as a human one we are all after all interconnected! Congrad's Light & Love
Haight Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Andrea, I love your captivating poem and how you imaged this woman's inner spirit. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:57 PM
beautiful Andrea.. ! woman.. woman. :) kudos!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. I like how you transformed this women so magically. Wonderful poem.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Wow, I love this great write, Andrea! I think all women have a tigress inside wating to be revealed even if only to ourselves. Congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
May Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Awesome write Andrea...I like the line about the jungle...Congrats on your win
Mcintosh Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. This is a different sort of poem - unique. I enjoyed reading it. Love and prayers, Gina
Yvonne Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 2:51 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN ANDREA. THIS WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITES IN THIS CONTEST. why am I screaming?
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:44 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Your tiger woman seeks an outlet to her emotions; in the middle of her day she naps...at night she finally snaps. // paul
Bordner Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 7:04 PM
I think the the Tigress is in your reflection Andrea. I wonder if your purr is as limber as your feline lunges. I love how you escapade into your nocturnal territory unabashedly releasing the wild ego. J.A.B.
Bordner Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Neat structure too...an unorthodox Cat..J.A.B.
May Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Very nice write Andrea...intriguing...
Man Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Busy day of a house wife Andrea, enjoyed your write
Mcdaid Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 6:35 PM
outstanding piece of writing andrea very beautifully drawn
Hamilton Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 7:56 PM
this is a fascinating write Andrea so inspirational ty for placing my poem hugs
Kiser Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 2:35 PM
This whole section sums it all up nicely, "The mask of this woman falls without a sound to the leaf strewn ground. She raises her face to the moon. In its light, the stripes of a tigress are revealed!"
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