A House Haunted

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This is dedicated to Barbie, a life-long friend who inspired this poem with the photos she took of this house most haunted....thank you!

It stood there
looking empty and old,
neglected and sad
with windows shuttered,
covered in shadow 
both day and night,
hovered over 
by trees whose branches
disguised the house
and made it seem 
a part of the 
overgrown landscape, 
completely surrounding it,
keeping strangers and unawares
at bay.

It stood there
shrinking from the present
almost lifeless,
a house with no soul
no face, no breath,
as if it started out as a ruin
and was determined
to remain so for all time,
unwanted, unkempt,
shunned by passersby,
its roof looking tortured
its doors uncertain
as to whether they opened at all 
and no one knew
and no one asked.

It stood there
talking to itself
in a silent conversation
that no one heard,
talking about things
that used to be
as though the Past was in the Now
and the Now belonged to the Past,
and who would dare
to knock on its doors
or tap on its windows
to see if anyone would answer
or show their presence
to the world outside,
a world gone by.

I stood there
on many a night
along the side of the road
just endlessly peering
at this lonely old place
wondering, waiting
for a light inside
to be turned on
at the same appointed time
emanating from behind
heavy and yellowed lace curtains
that looked like tattered spider webs
in only one crooked window
and one window only
hung with spidery lace.

I stood there
on those moonlit nights
bewitched by this house
listening to calls
and breaths of wild things
that roamed all around me
under ink-black star-filled skies,
but no light from moon nor star
could illumine
this clapboard-covered curio
from another day and age
concealed by branches, vines
and bramble,
bushes and nettles 
and mystery.

I stood there
wondering
who turned on that only light,
who roamed the house by night
who walked its tilted floors
who locked its uncertain doors
who hung the curtains of lace
who built this unsettling place
who called this abode their home
and how many hallways would they roam
and are there secrets that lived inside
and what was the bramble trying to hide,
was there anything for it to reveal
anything for it to tell
this house haunted that knew me so well?

copyright © 2019 Gregory Firlotte

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/15/2022 12:25:00 PM
wondering, waiting for a light inside to be turned on OMG I thought it was just me who did this. I love it, definitely a fav to read again and again
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Nora!! I wrote this poem about my childhood experiences 60 years ago -- and the house is still standing, ready to collapse and still inhabited. The yard is overgrown and bushes and trees cover the house almost completely. Scary!
Date: 3/9/2022 8:37:00 AM
Very, very well written, pulling in the reader as you set your scene. I enjoyed this very much.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, James! Even though I wrote this poem from childhood memories 60 years ago, the house is still standing and ready to collapse and still inhabited -- how strange and creepy is that? I went inside only once and thought I was living in Victorian times -- everything was antique, dark and foreboding.
Date: 3/8/2022 2:50:00 AM
I loved it!!! A very well written poem and I enjoyed it. I was looking forward to hearing about the ghost and spirits and their stories. I'm a super paranormal fan. Ghosts are left in houses and are earthbound because their story has been left incomplete. Just my interpretation. But again I really loved the poem.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Shirley! This house is still standing (barely) and still occupied. The yard is completely overgrown and practically obscures the house. I described the house in my poem as I saw it 60 years ago -- and it has deteriorated further but is still inhabited. Even the neighbors are frightened of it!
Date: 3/7/2022 1:17:00 PM
Spooky. I've seen ghosts. Lived in haunted houses x 2. Love to see the photos of the interior of the house that you write of here. It seems to me that some houses and the remnants of life haunting them, living in their very foundations, floorboards, walls, exteriors, and the spectres looking out their windows ...call out to certain people. Especially those considered 'sensitive'...great write.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lady Labyrinth! This house (which is ready to collapse) is still occupied and even the neighbors avoid going near it. And in my poem, I described it from 60 years ago -- that's how creepy it was back then. The house is a supernatural force, I think!
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/8/2022 3:07:00 AM
I would love to hear your experiences. So this Restaurant here in Ok that I work at is ice cream/rest/marketplace and one day I was in the walk-in and someone tapped me on the shoulder, no one there. I came out and the coworkers were laughing they said we see that you've met Tex and Maisy I said what they pointed to the cameras. Plain as day there was a cowboy in a long rain jacket cowboy hat and gun. In the corner was Maisy sweeping the floor. I chuckled. Here's the thing I'm a sensitive and every restaurant I've worked at there's always ghosts. The kids that worked for me were scared and kept telling me why are you talking to them?? I told them they just want someone to know they're here and they miss their family. So no joke kids start talking to them and the lights flickered....they were so happy. I have so many experiences but that one is my favorite.
Date: 3/7/2022 11:04:00 AM
Who, what, when were and why has this house abandoned come to you? Perhaps a connection or a profound synchronicity? Very nice verse. I am glad your poems came to me, Gregory!
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya! This is a real house in Maine on the very street where I grew up. The house currently is in dire condition and looking ready to collapse, although it is still occupied. Even the neighbors today are frightened of it!
Date: 3/14/2021 11:54:00 PM
This is a fabulous write! we have one not far from where we live and it is in very good condition but unoccupied for 20 years. A very expensive property abandoned! You describe the house and your reaction to it so well!!
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Krish! This house is still standing, ready to collapse, covered completely by trees and bushes and still occupied. Even the neighbors are frightened of it. And to think my poem is a recollection of my childhood experiences 60 years ago -- and the house is still there. Creepy and strange, indeed!
Date: 10/1/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hello Gregory Firlotte, so nice to meet you. This is a creepy poem. It made my skin crawl. Now i wonder who lives there in spirit. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2019 1:44:00 PM
Hello Gregory, I wonder if it is haunted.Do you think it is? Have a nice day my friend.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 10/1/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene! It's a real house up the road where I grew up in Maine...and it's still there. All overgrown and even more creepy.
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