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A Hot Winter Day

Fingertips touch lightly that trickles warm chills.. The palms of my hands hold silky cheeks as heat spills.. My heart forces warmth through out my lips to my toes.. Our desire and cravings break the cold winter woes.. Inspired by all the "Spicy Ladies entries" and of course my wife Rosanna lol

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Brittany Reynolds

Date: 10/27/2012 10:30:00 AM

Good poem, it resolves the title wonderfully.

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:08:00 AM

Very Nice!!!

I Dream In Poetry

Date: 1/24/2011 8:48:00 PM

Great spicy write! HOT!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 2:32:00 PM

When I saw the title, I thought this was an entry for the oxymoronica contest, Michael. But would a pleasant surprise! Looking for someone to keep my toes warm at night too. Love, carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:28:00 PM

Think Ron and I will have a does of this Hot Winter Day only making it a hot Winter night.. my W.K. for it sure is below cold here.. one way to stay warm and cozy ..read Michael's passionate hot lines.. Jersey Girl does..with luv.

John Rhinem

Date: 1/22/2011 5:09:00 PM

Smile ~ Well, this sounds as though it were most definitely a moment amid something extremely passionate I would venture thus to say and, "You Brushed Its Canvas Within Romantics Vibrant Hues 'My Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!'" ~ "Kudos" ~ "Thank You," for the kind com &, keep brushing such lovely swirls of colour ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Gifted Friend;'" Bye!:) ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 2:51:00 PM

well, I sure thought it looked spicy, Michael! WE need to thank Rosanna for this one! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/22/2011 2:37:00 PM

The warmth is much more forceful tgo break the winter woes, hahahah. as always enjoyed the humor, Michael

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/22/2011 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Michael. I'll try again. Yes there have been so many limericks. I'll take that off the contest. Joyce

I Dream In Poetry

Date: 1/22/2011 1:46:00 PM

Cute write! I wish it was a HOT WINTERS DAY here! It's got down to 0 degrees here last night!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/22/2011 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Michael for your generous rating for my poem. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 10:20:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this Cheyenne pepper of a work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 8:37:00 AM

Oh my goodness Mr. F!! hehe, you sure created some warmth of your own with this one hey? :) love Wilma

Jod!E Quintero

Date: 1/22/2011 8:35:00 AM

Muy caliente! Like a lot! JodieQ

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/22/2011 8:33:00 AM

Lovely and HOT HOT HOT for a cold day filled with snow and ice! I know you are certainly inspired by your beautiful Rosanna! love,Deb

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2011 8:16:00 AM

Nice pair of couplets that convey clear descriptiveness.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 7:00:00 AM

A Heart Felt Thanks to all you lovely ladies who entered the contest and made me blush more then once...love Michael