A "hopeless" Diamond (In the Rough)

French trader Tavernier in a greed-inspired way
Glared at an idol of a temple in Mandalay
Prying a gem from its eye socket, a curse prevailed
Tavernier died bankrupt soon after making the sale

Louis XIV bought the stone, 1668
A gift to his mistress, Louis had it cut heart-shape
For dabbling in Black Magic, this madam was burned
A century passed with the curse’s power unlearned

The diamond was then bestowed on Marie Antoinette
For wearing it with boastful pride, Marie lost her head
She lost respect from the commoners of her nation
This gem has since been linked to the French Revolution

Cut far smaller, the gem resurfaced, 1830
When a London banker bought the rock of infamy
Henry Thomas Hope survived; the curse appeared to break
For 70 years the Hope Diamond’s wrath lay in state

A Hope heir’s marriage collapsed; his wife evoked the curse
As she foretold, subsequent owners’ fates would be worse
French broker Jacques Colot went mad, suicide his road
Sultan “Abdul the Damned,” insane after being deposed

Then to an American the Hope Diamond was sold
Washington Post owner Maclean watched horrors unfold
Other household members died, but it was Maclean’s son
Ten years old, struck by a car, his Dad’s mind came undone

Ultra-light ray tests caused the mystery diamond to glow
With safety in mind, Hope’s eerie stone found a new home
It remained locked on display in the Smithsonian
Could it be to blame for all that’s wrong in Washington?

Tragedy also tied to raiders of King Tut’s tomb
Perhaps lessons can be gleaned from those who met their doom
Robbing temples, burial sites, outcomes always bad
Greedy souls’ quests for wealth can leave them totally mad

So don’t expect me to purchase a diamond in the rough
Considering this gem’s history, a sandstone’s quite enough
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Tacito Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 2:56 PM
What a journey here. Very atmospheric. Such a message stated here...excellent job!
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:49 AM
A poem to learn from, wonderful poetic story, written way beyond my time here on soup. Glad to read it as a featured poem, Carolyn. Harry
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March 15, 2011 at 5:05 PM
I missed this one before. Congrats on having this interesting tale featured. Vince
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Congrats, dear Carolyn on this gem. Get it! Hardy har, har. Seriously, you come up with some of the most interesting stuff. I am such a fan. Love, Dave
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 6:27 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Carolyn. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
Golden Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Brilliant, flawless, full of color and light! You are a diamond, Carolyn, and nothing about you is rough! Bravo! Donna
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August 21, 2009 at 6:56 AM
beautiful... you tell a tale so nicely. even though its not a tale and there is more to it than meets the eye, i soaked in the poem and felt pure delight. regards, Girish
Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Carolyn congratulations on placing second in Nathan's contest - God Bless, MJ
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July 12, 2009 at 6:18 AM
CONGRATLATIONS ON rAUL'S CONTEST MY GOOD FRIEND--LOVE YOU--CHARMA ;-)
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July 3, 2009 at 8:31 PM
This is quite some work of the pen. Cleverly done as a quatrain, involving history, bringing up the theme of greed, for a diamond in the rough still has the potential to be the brightest, strongest stone in nature. It is scarry to look at things in ways of a curse, making your poem also spooky. Thanks for sharing a great work and thank you for your review of my poem. Caroline.
Guzzi Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:55 PM
such history, so learned, enjoyable, informative and educational! Light & Love
Rider Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 3:36 PM
You are amazing when it comes the history heaped in your works, Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest! ~Trudy~
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June 30, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Carolyn, love this poem. It is going to my favs. I too am a lover of history. And you have really brought it out in this one. Lots of Love, Misty
Johnson Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Well researched info. Certainly a diamond in the rough. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for your comments on my haiku. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 12:15 PM
A bit of a history lesson and a stunning poem all in one.. and very deserving of the second place win in the contest..I am happy with my honorable mention also
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June 29, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest, Carolyn! And thank you for all your kind comments =]
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, your poems are also a great teaching tool, filled with such interesting historical information. WEll done!!
Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Congratualtions Carolyn on 2nd place in Raul's contest, Love James.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Carolyn .Rgds Brian
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June 27, 2009 at 11:15 PM
Carolyn, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul
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June 27, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place in my contest! Nate
Lebaron Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 9:00 PM
Great poem, im always intrigued by such tales, thanks for writing.
Hickman Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 9:23 PM
another fabulous write my friend that has much history and knowledge wrapped around your talent of rhyme and flowing words and descriprtions,,good luck as if you will need it with this amazing write,,and as always my dear friend thank you for your personal words and especially for reading mine,,,blessings..Cecil
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June 23, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comments! Now, as for your poems: I love the way you write. There's something so special about the way you teach us things in each well-crafted poem. I admire the aestheticists for their "art for art's sake" but I admire this in all it's exact opposition even more. Poety for liesure, poetry for education. Do you teach? If not then I think you should! :D Nathaniel
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