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My first home was on a shady street, It was a large old brick house with a porch; Oh, the hours I spent on that porch playing, There was a massive backyard with bright colors. My mother loved to plant flowers of all kinds, Father hung a swing for me beneath a bent tree; I would sway with the wind in my hair all day, In the summer we had a wading pool to cool off. Our street was on a hill or so it seemed to me, In reality, it was a slope but was fun for roller skates; The hill ended in an emerald green park, It had benches all around, and a beautiful still pond. I loved to watch the swans and ducks drifting, And would lie on the bank trying to catch baby frogs; Often mother would make a picnic lunch, Under the trees we were a real happy family. At the top of the stairs was my lovely bedroom, My bed covered with many dolls and teddy bears; There were books shelves and a writing desk, And I even had my own little balcony with flowers. The kitchen was big, cozy and warm with smells, I can still see mother and grandma cooking supper; The house had tons of nooks and hiding places, Fantastic for playing hide and seek with grandma. And then it all came to a tragic, and sad end, We went away for a weekend and when we returned; Our home was burnt to the ground; nothing left, We got a new home, but it was never the same to me. _____________________ September 2, 2015 Verse For the contest, A Childs First Home, sponsor, Verlena S. Walker First Place

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Date: 3/1/2021 4:43:00 AM
Such beautiful memories of your lovely home. Such memories STAY with us. Am now reminded of my childhood, when I and my sister used to search for places to play hide and seek. This is SO lovely. Am faving this dear friend. Have a blessed day. Hugs ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2021 7:27:00 AM
Ani, thank you for bringing me back to this old poem of mine, and for the compliment and the FAV, so grateful _Constance
Date: 10/22/2015 4:58:00 PM
Very good I like it, i'ts got spirit, congrats Well written x wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/22/2015 5:02:00 PM
A winner xxxx
Date: 10/22/2015 1:16:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/18/2015 5:05:00 PM
Such beautiful memories to hold in your mind and heart, Broken Wings. Love the poetic description of your first home that will always be with you despite the tragic event. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:24:00 PM
Wings! How many testing times you've endured in life! A 7 ! Love, Balveen
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:34:00 PM
How sad. Beautiful story.
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:19:00 PM
oh my gosh is this true? It actually burned to the ground? How horrible!! You are writing up a storm, Constance. Wish I could do that. I have six poems waiting to post and ten that I WANT to WRITE. Sure hope my weekend will be fruitful!
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:19:00 PM
awesome write.
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:07:00 AM
what really makes a home....first, Love must be free to roam....to inspire cherished memories....so home is in the heart apparently....;)
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Date: 9/3/2015 7:52:00 AM
Broken Wings, when one finds a home and memories really bloomed so beautifully it will be hard finding new if suddenly it gets destroyed!enjoyed reading it!~Olive Eloisa =")
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:50:00 PM
memories build in a home, the home becomes family, good luck in the contest:) enjoyed this entry
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