A Hole Full of Tears

While cleaning out my garage yesterday 
I FOUND A SHOVEL, BROKE, RUSTED AND OLD 
To think, that I had almost threw it away 
I couldn't, IT HAS STORIES TO BE TOLD 

It had been used by many hands- long gone 
My grandfather purchased it years ago 
Hanging on the hook it's always been on 
Still here all these years, little did he know 

My father dug worms with it for fishing 
My brothers used it to bury our cat 
My mother used it for her gardening 
Everyone had used it for this or that 

Somehow, this shovel that's been here for years 
Had dug a hole, in my heart WITH TEARS 

I found a shovel 
while cleaning out my garage 
still here all these years 

A shovel, broke, rusted and old...it has stories to be told, with tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 10:52 PM
Ahh im going to try this this is really fun, but do all the words in haiku and monoku need to be taken from sonnet? Sorry i sound stupid lol love this one
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:47 AM
Hi Ink, Yes, all the words must be taken from the sonnet for both the haiku and monoku. Thanks for giving it a try and loving it...and of course, by no means are you stupid (lol).
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Thanks for this wonderful example. I sure hope I did mine right!
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:51 AM
Looking forward to reading it! Thank you, Andrea.
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Ahhh!! Expressive and emotive work you have penned in this one. Thank you for sharing part of your life with us. Sara K
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Thank you for reading this, Sara. Always a pleasure! Charlie
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Love the poem, will give it a try
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Thank you, Eve. Looking forward to reading yours!
Dutta Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Very nice. I'm whelmed. Have Great Days
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:53 AM
Thank you, Anisha. Have a great weekend!
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:45 PM
what an interesting contest challenge Charles, I am no a sonnet fan but will see what I can come up with for your challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:54 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Looking forward to reading yours :) Hugs x
La France Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Charlie, wonderful poem and creative too! Great example for your contest. I hope that I can write a poem worth, blessings
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Thank you, Constance. Looking forward to reading yours...I'm sure you will do just fine :) Blessings
Wolf Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Poignant, evocative write, Charlie. Keep 'em coming. ~ I.Z. Misting-up
Lindley Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:42 PM
A great poem that reminds me of my father's shovel. So many wonderful memories. I wonder were it is now. My older brother got it after dad's death. A fav too. A gem my good friend. God bless.
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August 29, 2023 at 6:06 AM
The stories that shovel could tell ! A beautiful nostalgic poem Charlie! Deb x
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Charles, this wonderful sonnet made me smile AND tear up. Nostalgia at its best! Janice
Volumes Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:38 PM
I am sure so many can relate to your wonderful tale Charlie. Some possessions that pass down through a family become almost part of the family. terrific write Charlie. Best wishes SV
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