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A Hint of Autumn

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Yesterday's mist of soft opaque By warm kisses of the season A flaming night sky still present Inside this Augustine soft rush A cool touch made possible by Yesterday's mist of soft opaque bringing forth Amnesian moments Trailblazer thoughts of soft regress A spot of sunlight end of day and still the time cannot erase yesterday's mist of soft opaque by the commencement of its hour Past days are gone hints of Autumn begin anew, we watch the hues as they change to shades of yesterday's mist of soft opaque August 14, 2022 Sponsor Regina McIntosh Contest Name Hint of Autumn

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W.A. Cholt

Date: 8/19/2022 5:01:00 PM

A season of many colours and a very fine poem. Enjoyed this.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/16/2022 3:15:00 AM

This is really lovely as it weaves its way into autumn colors Vie. Your entry should do well in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2022 5:20:00 AM

A charming poem my friend. Enjoyed the glimpses of autumn, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2022 1:31:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, I am so looking forward to Autumn and all its lovely charms, air !

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/14/2022 11:06:00 PM

I remember autumns like yours Vie, You take me back there, so soft the poetry, and the voice across the air.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2022 2:51:00 AM

I remember young Autumns when all I had to do is wear my russet lipstick and slip out into the ironed sun of my youth. Ah, to be young again, would I be as sage, no, maybe a parsley yes, lol, rambling on, bear with me its 5:50 am here, thanks Harry.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/14/2022 10:28:00 PM

There are moments when I doubt if we have Autumn in Malta. The transition from Summer and winter is too short. Lovely poem though. Great imagery.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2022 2:50:00 AM

I agree dear Victor, the transition is always too subtle, I wish I could stretch Autumn into winter then spring, and forget all about snow and blizzards lol, its a Mtl girl speaking , have a great day.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2022 6:13:00 PM

Rose, your work is always characterized by its otherworldly beauty and charm. You were able to transmit such wonderful metaphors, which, when combined with your remarkable diction, added even more magic to the scene. I am quite grateful for the kind comment you left on my page.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2022 2:49:00 AM

What a beautiful touching comment Sotto, thank you for taking the time to elaborate, :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/14/2022 5:09:00 PM

Vie, I read it first, then I listened~how beautiful the "soft opaque", generates the transition from summer into autumn. Lovely and ethereal, your perennial signature! :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2022 2:48:00 AM

Thank you dear friend for reading about Autumn, Hope your keeping well :)