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A hiku

yellowing grass under shade trees blooms of vibrant hues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/2/2025 3:25:00 PM
Andrea sounds like the grass is getting long or the days have been dry. Blooms are always welcome as long as not from weeds! Smiles!!
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Date: 4/25/2025 5:49:00 PM
Lovely, lovely - <3
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Date: 4/25/2025 11:24:00 AM
Perfect imagery, Andrea.
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Date: 4/25/2025 10:35:00 AM
Nice haiku. Colorful blooms around a tree.
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Date: 4/25/2025 7:07:00 AM
I see those colorful blooms dancing around your tree!
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Date: 4/24/2025 6:44:00 PM
Yellow grass spots are frustrating to my husband. Those shady trees are like nature's curtains. Soon "vibrant hues" appear to distract us from those shady sad spots with sunshine snowdrop smiles. What a cute, pretty poem Andrea
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Date: 4/24/2025 6:26:00 PM
short as splendid, enjoyed your inspiring haiku
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Date: 4/24/2025 8:37:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I adore the exquisite imagery and the format of your hiku. The contrast between dullness and brightness is striking! Amazing poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/24/2025 7:07:00 AM
So beautiful dear andrea! Love the scattered words and how it goes well with “blooms of vibrant hues” best wishes always! Sending you light
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Date: 4/24/2025 5:51:00 AM
Pretty scene depicted
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Date: 4/24/2025 5:10:00 AM
- a nice one, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/24/2025 2:42:00 AM
The grass yellowing in the shade while flowers blooming.A meaningful write.
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