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A Hidden Place

In the calm and quiet forest deep Where bonny fairies go to sleep The stream runs so clear and sweet Rippling where rock and water meet Sunshine peaks through the green bower Gilding the leaves in the waning hours Tiny silver fish dart here and there Music of the bees is everywhere The day was perfect in this hidden place In every corner nature's lovely face Barbara Gorelick 6/2/11 For the Rippling Stream contest

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful, Barbara. Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Barbara
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem Barbara..Congrats on your HM.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your placement in my contest with this lovely poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:06:00 PM
kudos for the goody win, barbara! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congrats BG on your HM in Constance's contest with this beautiful write ..
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:50:00 PM
Barbara this composition on stream is so soothing, it's a fairy like place you've described here..Good luck in the contest..love, gautami
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:24:00 PM
I love this, Barbara. It reminds me of a local beauty spot, Lydford Gorge, and makes me long to go there again : )
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:21:00 PM
I think you did that picture justice, Barbara. good luck in Constance's contest!
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:37:00 PM
Very impressive work..It has great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I felt as though I was there..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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