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A Heavenly Hall-O-Ween!

“My God” said St. Peter “how neat A donkey head for trick or treat! Just two feet? I want more!” So god gave him four off he ran hee-haw bleat! There Gabriel stood with his horn He said God I really am bored! With a poof he’s reborn With a tail and a horn For tonight Gab’s gone unicorn! “Well, Heavens!” Said Beelzebub “Now ain’t this a fine rub-a-dub! “Can I play?” “YES YOU MAY!” and poof he’s an apple in tub! Yes, God is a Hall-o-ween gaffer And the night rang out with HIS laughter Ghosts genuflect as they fly Vamp’s morph to good guys And Hosts raised a toast to hereafters!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:28:00 AM
Many congrats Deborah on your win in John's contest with this super Limerick >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 3:53:00 AM
Congrats on your success in contest...welll deserved....luv Michael
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:30:00 AM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:26:00 AM
congratulations to you Deborah on a unique treat win!
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest...Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:27:00 PM
And a toast raised to you too, Deborah, for this wonderful write. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:03:00 PM
Deborah....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy a big win tonight for this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:53:00 PM
Hahaha. It really is imaginative and beautiful. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations opn this well deserved win, Debbie
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:52:00 PM
Very cool, funny limerick, Deb. Congrats on your win in John's contest and your big win in the Soup contest! Hope you're enjoying Egypt. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's third place, have a happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:33:00 AM
One of the best entries I have read for this interesting contest. Good luck dEb, I really like this one!
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:55:00 PM
Soup mail....and yes...I found two of them!! :)
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:54:00 PM
very clever and well written...good luck in the contest Debbie Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:30:00 PM
Very witty and humorous write, Debbie, as always I enjoyed the write,
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Date: 10/27/2010 4:55:00 PM
You are so gooooood!!!!! Limericks seem to come easily for you...this is clever and as always debbie's ...unique!! (Ghosts genuflect....that I've got to see!!!) :) Win win win!! ps...hey wha happen to your you tube?? couldn't find it this p.m. ???
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