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A Heart-To-Heart Talk

"Why do you love me, Dear?" she cooed. "You're cuddly, cute, and sweet," he said. "Your mama's cat is too," she cried and made some distance in the bed. "Just teasing, Hon! I wasn't through," he reasoned with his peeved young wife. "I'd be a wretched, lonely man without you to complete my life." "Now, why do you love me?" he asked. Her answer: "You're so good and kind and very easy on the eyes. A man like you is quite a find." He smiled. "Such precious words, my love, but you've described our pastor too and other men we both could name. Why was it I you chose to woo?" "Your point is gently made," she said. "My HEART chose you, and yours chose me." Mere words will never be enough to tell what eyes of love can see. Date: January 29, 2018 Contest Title: Eloquent Banter: You Tease me So Nicely Placed 1st Sponsor: Edward McCall January 7, 2019, entered in Mark Toney's 2019 Poetry Marathon, mile 10 placed 7th of 10 September 10, 2020 entered in the Strand Completely Your Choice (7) Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/13/2019 4:57:00 AM
Although the have been searching for the words to convey why they chose each other, they make a good pint at the end by acknowledging that wors can't describe the depth of love or even the first attraction. Well done, Janice! Congratulations on your well-earned win in Mark's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/13/2019 12:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Carolyn! Janice
Date: 1/12/2019 4:09:00 PM
Well penned, Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/12/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/12/2019 3:34:00 PM
Janice, this is a delight to read and oh so true :) Congrats on your win on mile 10 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/12/2019 5:22:00 PM
Mark, once again, you have made my day! Thank you so much. Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 3:53:00 PM
Sweet and congrats on your win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Normie! Janice
Date: 2/12/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janice ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 2/11/2018 7:02:00 PM
Well said, Janice. Nice back and forth exchange. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Date: 2/11/2018 4:58:00 PM
such a simple yet profound take on love Janice, i liked this one, congratulations on ur first placement
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis! Janice
Date: 2/11/2018 3:50:00 PM
Hi Janice, this is such a sweet and beautiful love poem thank you so much for entering it. I made me smile the whole way through congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2018 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for this nice comment, placing my poem so high, and sponsoring, Edward! Janice
Date: 2/11/2018 11:38:00 AM
Great love write Janice, congratulations...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 1/26/2016 9:16:00 PM
Janice, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2016 9:22:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 1/17/2016 1:23:00 PM
Creative work choosen for the contest.. Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/17/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 1/14/2016 5:07:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/14/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, Upma. Janice
Date: 1/13/2016 10:31:00 PM
Janice, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/13/2016 10:48:00 PM
Thank YOU, Skat. Janice

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