a hazy perspective and the need for clarity

I have no sense of time,
the pride from my accomplishments  
is as null as the concept of permanence,  
besides the fog —  
seeping into my mind  
as deep as the proverbial soul within me.  

in the mist of what is left of myself,  
the only depth i can catch is lost —
lost recognition.
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July 11, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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