A Hardscrabble Life

Granny, hunched over the woodstove –
I smell fatback frying in cast iron,
Scents of morning in the Blue Ridge Mountains
Along with hazy mists hanging across them,
Parting for the sunlight as it makes its way up
Over the hills that surround every heart
Living out life on hardscrabble roads of old times.


September 11, 2019
Life Poetry Contest
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Author's note: This is my first try with this, so I'm terribly uncertain if I got it right :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/14/2019 1:06:00 PM
Love your use of imagery that shows how you feel. I have warm memories of my grandmother and where I grew up, as well.
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Date: 9/13/2019 8:04:00 AM
It’s interesting how smells can instantly transport us to a different time and space. Well done.
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Date: 9/11/2019 12:46:00 AM
Not to worry--its the second time to be on your fingers, as they already took your toes on the first reading--Amen Regina for the Host is on your side!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/11/2019 3:05:00 AM
Thanks for the kind comments... and poetic one, too. Blessings.
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