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A Haibun Song

(December-January)) The brazen wind flows through the naked trees, where multitudes of scrawny fingers attached to stout limbs conduct the aria. the trill of the dawn awakes the sedulity a sense of fragrance Each perpetual morning a regimental instinct, drives along the day, when as the lone Bugler at his post, reveille resounds upon the streaming torrent. the chill of winter initiates spiral breath fruit rots on the ground The tempest from the Southern Ocean provokes nakedness within this place, destroyer to all that was verdant, yet an act of kindness? To ready life for spring to live once again. through the morning mist air is turning icy blue the tide rushes in © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Date: 12/16/2019 9:02:00 PM
The perfect poem to read on a chilly winter's night... and it was nice to be reminded that Spring will eventually be on it's way... Excellent work Harry!
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Date: 12/16/2019 2:22:00 PM
Your striking imagery appeals to all our senses, Harry. Even winter can be enjoyed, in the knowledge that spring will soon be making an appearance. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/6/2019 5:21:00 PM
This is beautifully expressive, Harry- short prose passages, interspersed with perfect haiku. I've been wanting to try haibun- this is inspiring! (I particularly like the last haibun...Warm.Regards~~AquaM~~
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:31:00 PM
beautiful description, Harry. Why don't you separate the haiku parts with line breaks? That would make it look even better!
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Date: 12/4/2019 6:30:00 PM
thanks Andrea, will do....
Date: 12/2/2019 5:23:00 AM
Nature’s vigoroso even in her Winter. A beautiful poem...a fave!
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Date: 12/1/2019 11:30:00 PM
Great descriptions. I can feel the chill.
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Date: 11/28/2019 7:14:00 AM
Great imagery in you song Harry--enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/28/2019 2:07:00 AM
Well done Harry The best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing this
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