A Golden Kiss

I Form - Imagism 9-18-24 6-20 lines
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A Golden Kiss

Summer bows out and leaves a golden kiss
 Maize dozes in mellow aster afternoons
 Orange glows on future jack-o-lanterns
 Multicolor bumpy gourds ride snaking vines
 Yellow corn silks dance like razzle dazzles
 Apples drink in the fading crimson sun
 Sunflowers sigh -autumn storms breach the sky
 Geese with twilight on their wings see new stars
 Ruby gems of cranberries swim in bogs
 Purple grapes soak in the warmth for harvest
 Twirling leaves leave frosty lace skeletons
 Fuzzy bees bid adieu to yellow days
 Tawny acorns shiver in the cold nights
Fall wears an amber blush of jubilee.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Yellow corn silks dance like razzle dazzles...my favorite!
Kauffman Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hi Kim! I love to watch the joyful dance of corn silks in the wind. Had to include them in this poem of autumn images. So glad you enjoyed this bit of fall fun. Sending you all the blessings of autumn.
La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, lovely poem, Constance
Kauffman Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Hi Constance! Once again many thanks for this wonderful contest and my placement. I am so grateful for the time and thought you put into your contests expanding the skills and knowledge of poetry. Hope you are doing well. Sending you all the blessings of autumn as you are getting ready to celebrate Thanksgiving.
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 4:07 PM
Just beautiful, Sam. "Geese with twilight on their wings see new stars"
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much, Paige. Imagism is fun as it allows us to paint a picture and step into it! Blessings!
George Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:32 PM
"Orange glows on future jack-o-lanterns Multicolor bumpy gourds ride snaking vines Yellow corn silks dance like razzle dazzles" Wow, so beautiful dear Sam. Each line brings in a beautiful image. Each image stands out in lucidity and elegance. "Twirling leaves leave frosty lace skeletons Fuzzy bees bid adieu to yellow days" Another set of lines confirming the changes that come towards the end of Autumn. Your poetry is magical, sweet friend. This is a sure FAVE for me.
Rodgers Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Ohh Dear Sam, what wonderful and expressive images of Autumn. Each line was almost like being in the scene. Full of colors, nature, metaphors, and action. What isn’t there to love. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Dearest Sam, what a wonderful poem that celebrates the transition from summer to autumn, highlighting the beauty and richness of the fall season. It captures the essence of nature’s changes, the harvest, and the bittersweet farewell to summer's warmth. Really enjoyed and appreciate your support
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sam I love the descriptions :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Greetings Heidi! Thank you. So much fun to celebrate this beautiful season through its images and a growing awareness of the beauty. Hope you are doing well. Blessings to you!
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