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A walled in pond with trees draped with moss brighten by a warm predawn glow Two sisters sit on a small stone clearing keeping secrets of their own that can never be lost A gleam of awe on their lovely faces an open gold filigree chest they hold Lustrous pearls once worn by their grandmother they hold dear ,treasured and old they’ve been told Believing in dreams their destiny might bring forth and the magic of the bond between sisters love that can by no means be lost
8/13/2016 Poem was written in tribute to Broken Wings with the inspiration of her poems; Clarity In A Treasure Box http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/clarity_in_a_treasure_box_804717 The Pearl Necklace http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_pearl_necklace_794952 It Takes Four - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings Written with the four forms listed below and in this order Crystalline - 2 lines 9/8 syllables, unrhymed Kimo - 3 lines 10/7/6 syllables, unrhymed Quatrain - 4 lines, line 2 and 4 rhyme, lines with similar number of syllables Tanka - 5 lines, 5/7/5/7/7 syllables, unrhymed

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Date: 8/24/2016 7:39:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive write, Eve! Congrats on your fantastic 2nd place win! Blessings!
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Date: 8/23/2016 1:32:00 PM
This is lovely, Eve. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 8/23/2016 12:06:00 PM
Coming back, Eve, to say, congratulations on your admirable win ...
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Date: 8/22/2016 1:20:00 PM
Eve, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem. I just love your image too ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/23/2016 7:34:00 AM
you were meant to have them Hugs sweet friend
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Constance La France
Date: 8/23/2016 2:09:00 AM
so you see Eve, your image is fitting and so beautiful, thank you, in the end we won but so not what grandma would have wanted to have happen. Nor my mother. Now he is dying of bone cancer and asking for us....I guess he has things to confess, my sister refuses to see him, but I may, it is called forgiveness...
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Constance La France
Date: 8/23/2016 2:05:00 AM
There were terrible circumstances after my grandma's death, a wicked uncle tried to cheat us out of our inheritance, and my sister and I had to fight to get what grandma would have wanted us to have, mother had already passed away, that is one reason I hid the necklace and I also took things for my sister~
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/22/2016 2:04:00 PM
Hello Constance thank you for the placement in your contest. this was written in tribute of you with for the poem of your grandmother's pearl necklace. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/22/2016 12:23:00 PM
Eve, just beautiful lovely lady..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/22/2016 2:04:00 PM
thank you, Laura, Hugs sweet friend
Date: 8/22/2016 4:05:00 AM
Wow, the poem is draped with lovely memories & moments of relationships that we share with our loved ones. I enjoyed reading it very much. It's a gem. Best wishes, Eve.
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:05:00 PM
thank you so very much for the compliment, Afzal, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/16/2016 3:53:00 PM
GREAT job with such a pretty topic you chose to do. Little fairy children. It's so cute.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you dear friend
Date: 8/16/2016 12:14:00 PM
Your entry allows each line to be written like a gift. It is lovely Eve. I hope to see it at the top. ; ) 7 Your Quatrain my favorite!
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear friend
Date: 8/16/2016 11:15:00 AM
Well penned Eve...a magical verse...best wishes
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Ah, such a beautiful verse Eve...you have outdone yourself...BW will be impressed...good luck and god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:58:00 AM
Great fairy poem about two lovely sisters and their secrets:)
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:17:00 PM
This is so enchanting Eve, I just had to say, I came to read this yet again! Hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/22/2016 2:07:00 PM
thank you sweet friend always welcome
Date: 8/15/2016 11:50:00 AM
one of your best, eve , and the visual enhances this spectacular work... ohh!..huggs
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Date: 8/14/2016 6:46:00 PM
Sometimes, I think you're just showing off. Haha, this was so well composed and what a captivating, whimsical, magically descriptive tale. Best of luck in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/14/2016 6:59:00 PM
thank you I saw the picture and couldn't resist. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
- A wonderful, beautiful poem Eve - #7 - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/14/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you beautiful lady can not compare to your amazing work hugs eve
Date: 8/14/2016 6:41:00 AM
Dreamful images ... very nice ....
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/14/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Probir.... Hugs Eve
Date: 8/13/2016 9:08:00 PM
Such beautiful prose! Hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/14/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you , Arthur

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