A Glimpse of the Ages

A cool breeze
    like the slightest graze
of the recently passed
flows under the shaded thickness
     of the ancient woods.
  The worn paths,
         sunken below
 the forest floor
   like water forgotten stream beds,
      slide naturally
through this wooded sanctuary.

    Broken decaying trees
rest upon the strong backs
       of the sun reaching ones,
spreading their
    immense girth of leaves
  allowing the barest of  rods of sunlight
to illumin the undercarriage
  of this dense growth.

Stillness presses on me,
making me one
            and alone
with this placid place.
Ambering down the trail,
     knowing what every
touch of movement
   and nuance of the environment means.

In the distance
    all I see is trunks,
like a never-ending
        collection of mirrors
imposing their presence
  upon each other
 barely acknowledging my passing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Cooper Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 7:14 AM
nice artistic pen
Winter Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 12:47 PM
This is so wonderful. Truly appreciating nature to the fullest. Felt like I was there. Wishing I was there. Amazing imagery and so much more. Love, Shar
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October 28, 2008 at 10:33 AM
Hi Mark Absolutely Beautiful! You've captured the spirit of the woods elequently! I feel renewed smile. I love the ending. Love Light Truth Patricia
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