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A Glimpse of Spring

Spring is a fan-dance Teases us with a glimpse Leaves us entranced

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Date: 4/4/2022 7:31:00 AM
she is teasing us in Kansas too!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2022 6:09:00 PM
Dorothy is stressed out. Toto too.
Date: 4/3/2022 8:23:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku write. Spring is here, hooray. A great time of the year. Have a blessed spring day................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2022 5:59:00 PM
I opened the door for a veritable blizzard of snow yesterday (April 2) in Chicago. It came down like crazy for almost an hour. But within ten minutes of stopping, it was already melting... Gone in an hour. Whew!
Date: 4/2/2022 7:32:00 PM
Yes, Indeed ! Spring leaves us entranced !Beautiful.....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2022 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa. Here's to Spring! :) :)
Date: 4/2/2022 9:09:00 AM
Spring is a bit of flirt, yes, but she does tantalize, very original metaphor with the fan dance, quite apt!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2022 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for the generous evaluation, Michelle... I'm more and more taken with your poems. They are pure poesy! Thanks for posting them here. Best always, Gershon
Date: 4/1/2022 2:19:00 PM
A winner in my book!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2022 7:33:00 PM
OK. I'll buy the book, Kim! Thanks, Gershon
Date: 4/1/2022 12:45:00 PM
Yes! It knows how to tease here. Great one Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2022 3:28:00 PM
Springtime ought to know better than to play with us. But she's no 'April Fool.' :)
Date: 4/1/2022 6:44:00 AM
Spring is certainly a fan dance where I am, great Haiku.
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Date: 3/31/2022 8:16:00 PM
Yes, indeed! Spring leaves us entranced with burgeoning buds in nature and in life ! Beautiful Gershon !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2022 3:27:00 PM
Here's to Spring, Valsa!
Date: 3/31/2022 7:49:00 PM
Gershon, you did a great job with your metaphor about spring!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2022 3:25:00 PM
I'm trying my best, LaSaad...

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