A Girl Who Sells Peanuts

She floats on the saffron shore 
holding a bamboo basket.
Her heart beats 
within the shelter
of peanut shells.

Toys and text books, 
picnics and pamperings; 
all collided on a wall, 
but death dropped her 
to be tossed.

The girl in a dirty frock –
she sells parched peanuts
for coins and eye-pricks. 
‘Peanuts’, ‘Peanuts’ – her 
withered call haunts
 her parents in the grave.
Her pale figure walks away
with Time Teacher.

Fabiyas M V
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 1:02 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Fab. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Nice piece,Fabiyas.good write.Congrats on your win in this contest....
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Fab. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Fabiyas congrats on your win..David
A   Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Fab, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
Collins Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Dear Fabiyas, I am reminded of the picture of the little Vietnamese girl from the 60's running down the road burning from Napalm. Time Teacher can teach such pain. Kathy
Prabhu Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 9:05 AM
very picturesque one.... congrats on your win...~ sashi
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Fab. Love, Carol"
Pettit Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 11:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. Reading this reminded me a bit of the old movie "Duck Soup" starring the Marx Brothers.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:56 PM
congrats Fabiyas on an amazing write and win luv.. excellent words to absorb...
A   Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:51 PM
FAB~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:50 PM
I remember this one and I like it just as much THIS time, Congrats on your win.
Song Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 2:18 PM
When you write about real life I feel like I am a close yet distant witness..love your poetry, MV. It always stirs me deeply. I will be back to read this one on my favs. Love, Gwendolen
Freeman Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Thought provoking verse Fabiyas. Beautiful. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:48 PM
hi old friend ..how have u been? I was away for some time for hand surgery but slowly returning to read your synamic words ...happy new year ..
Esquire Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Dear FABIYAS, Congratulations on YOUR Potent Win in Debbie's Contest LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Dear Fab, If I may call YOU that I want to Thank-YOU for Pulling YOUR POEM Entree from My Contest "The Middle of the Road" I would Appreciate it if YOU would try Again The Rules are on the Contest Page Thank-YOU...Harry
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December 22, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Fab. Kim
Brown Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Fab. Love, Carol
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December 20, 2011 at 1:51 AM
Congratulations Fab a lovely wirte. happy holidays x
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December 16, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:45 PM
ahhhh but I KNEW it was a gem aye? LOL congrad's my dear friend! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest Fab. Love, Carol
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December 15, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations x
A   Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 10:36 AM
welll done... Hope you are fine,..p.d.
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM
ahhh .. this can work as a re-work of the Little Match Girl for my Contest Fab! Please submit it! Each culture always has there own take on similiar topics! Light & Love
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