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A Girl Who Sells Peanuts

She floats on the saffron shore holding a bamboo basket. Her heart beats within the shelter of peanut shells. Toys and text books, picnics and pamperings; all collided on a wall, but death dropped her to be tossed. The girl in a dirty frock – she sells parched peanuts for coins and eye-pricks. ‘Peanuts’, ‘Peanuts’ – her withered call haunts her parents in the grave. Her pale figure walks away with Time Teacher. Fabiyas M V

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/9/2012 1:02:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Fab. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:55:00 PM
Nice piece,Fabiyas.good write.Congrats on your win in this contest....
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Fab. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:04:00 PM
Fabiyas congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:09:00 AM
Fab, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:28:00 AM
Dear Fabiyas, I am reminded of the picture of the little Vietnamese girl from the 60's running down the road burning from Napalm. Time Teacher can teach such pain. Kathy
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:05:00 AM
very picturesque one.... congrats on your win...~ sashi
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Fab. Love, Carol"
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Date: 2/24/2012 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Reading this reminded me a bit of the old movie "Duck Soup" starring the Marx Brothers.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:56:00 PM
congrats Fabiyas on an amazing write and win luv.. excellent words to absorb...
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:51:00 PM
FAB~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:50:00 PM
I remember this one and I like it just as much THIS time, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2012 2:18:00 PM
When you write about real life I feel like I am a close yet distant witness..love your poetry, MV. It always stirs me deeply. I will be back to read this one on my favs. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:08:00 AM
Thought provoking verse Fabiyas. Beautiful. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:48:00 PM
hi old friend ..how have u been? I was away for some time for hand surgery but slowly returning to read your synamic words ...happy new year ..
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:15:00 PM
Dear FABIYAS, Congratulations on YOUR Potent Win in Debbie's Contest LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Dear Fab, If I may call YOU that I want to Thank-YOU for Pulling YOUR POEM Entree from My Contest "The Middle of the Road" I would Appreciate it if YOU would try Again The Rules are on the Contest Page Thank-YOU...Harry
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Fab. Kim
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Date: 12/20/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Fab. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations Fab a lovely wirte. happy holidays x
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Date: 12/16/2011 9:19:00 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
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Date: 12/15/2011 3:45:00 PM
ahhhh but I KNEW it was a gem aye? LOL congrad's my dear friend! Light & Love
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest Fab. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:36:00 AM
welll done... Hope you are fine,..p.d.
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Date: 12/14/2011 7:32:00 AM
ahhh .. this can work as a re-work of the Little Match Girl for my Contest Fab! Please submit it! Each culture always has there own take on similiar topics! Light & Love
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