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Written - 14th April 2024
Picture Promot Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico 

 

 

Two giraffes went out walking side by side Spied a dina with windows open wide There was food on the table With long necks they were able To eat and drink until giraffe-ified.

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Date: 4/24/2024 10:35:00 AM
Terrific fun! Well done!!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 4:04:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert, I’m giraffe-ified with that… Beryl
Date: 4/23/2024 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Drink, be marry and get geraffified. ;)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Anaya, I’ll take your advice, to drink until I’m giiraffe-ified :) Beryl
Date: 4/23/2024 9:21:00 AM
Such a cute creative wonderful poem, I loved it and loved the word you created giraffe-ified, vivid imagination. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 3:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer, that word giraffe-ified seems to have gone down well. Hugs and blessings in return, Beryl
Date: 4/17/2024 5:39:00 AM
fantastic imagination, i love so much girrafes, have a great time yann
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2024 3:53:00 PM
Thank you and bless you Yann… Beryl
Date: 4/16/2024 1:11:00 AM
:) Great limerick Belle!! You're the master(ess)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/16/2024 9:19:00 AM
Wow! Thank you so much for that Robert :)… Belle
Date: 4/15/2024 11:16:00 PM
I wonder if they ordered eggs over too easy or toast on butter....Nice limerick
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/16/2024 9:17:00 AM
Perhaps they ordered both, eggs and butter on toast. Thank you Mo… Beryl
Date: 4/15/2024 3:02:00 PM
lol great limerick Beryl!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/15/2024 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for that great comment Karen. Bless you, Beryl
Date: 4/15/2024 7:46:00 AM
Wonderfuul limerick, Beryl! Very unique and enjoysble. Pangie xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/15/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl xx
Date: 4/15/2024 7:37:00 AM
Lol, you stuck your neck out with this one Beryl, good luck in the contest. Greetings from Crete. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/15/2024 11:56:00 AM
Love your humorous reply Tom, have a wonderful time in Crete… Beryl
Date: 4/15/2024 2:09:00 AM
So well written. I love this limerick written in an original way. Hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/15/2024 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor, you’ve made my day smile. Hugs returned, Beryl
Date: 4/14/2024 5:00:00 PM
Lol, now that's an animalism! Good finish.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2024 7:08:00 PM
Thank you David. What is a drawing of a giraffe called - giraffiti… Beryl
Date: 4/14/2024 4:49:00 PM
Fun one, Beryl: I like your word play on the final word. That will stick with me a long while. LOL SuZ
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2024 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, very much, pleased as punch that you found this fun… Beryl
Date: 4/14/2024 12:13:00 PM
Beryl, your limerick elegantly captures the playful essence of two giraffes stumbling upon a diner during their walk. Cool that long necks allow them to reach the food on the table, leading to a whimsical transformation as they indulge in the unique experience.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2024 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Sotto, Giraffe have to be fed, that day it was fortunate that they had long necks. It’s a fun contest and was fun to write this Limerick… Beryl
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