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Written - 14th April 2024
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A Giraffic Surprise

Two giraffes went out walking side by side Spied a dina with windows open wide There was food on the table With long necks they were able To eat and drink until giraffe-ified.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Sidwell Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Terrific fun! Well done!!
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 4:04 PM
Thank you very much Robert, I’m giraffe-ified with that… Beryl
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 8:02 PM
Congratulations on your win! Drink, be marry and get geraffified. ;)
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Anaya, I’ll take your advice, to drink until I’m giiraffe-ified :) Beryl
Proxenos Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Such a cute creative wonderful poem, I loved it and loved the word you created giraffe-ified, vivid imagination. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 3:57 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer, that word giraffe-ified seems to have gone down well. Hugs and blessings in return, Beryl
Rolland Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:39 AM
fantastic imagination, i love so much girrafes, have a great time yann
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Thank you and bless you Yann… Beryl
Schatz Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:11 AM
:) Great limerick Belle!! You're the master(ess)
Edmonds  Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Wow! Thank you so much for that Robert :)… Belle
Mo Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:16 PM
I wonder if they ordered eggs over too easy or toast on butter....Nice limerick
Edmonds  Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Perhaps they ordered both, eggs and butter on toast. Thank you Mo… Beryl
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 3:02 PM
lol great limerick Beryl!
Edmonds  Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 3:24 PM
Thank you for that great comment Karen. Bless you, Beryl
Romios Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Wonderfuul limerick, Beryl! Very unique and enjoysble. Pangie xx
Edmonds  Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:57 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Lol, you stuck your neck out with this one Beryl, good luck in the contest. Greetings from Crete. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Love your humorous reply Tom, have a wonderful time in Crete… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 2:09 AM
So well written. I love this limerick written in an original way. Hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much Victor, you’ve made my day smile. Hugs returned, Beryl
Fisher Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Lol, now that's an animalism! Good finish.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 7:08 PM
Thank you David. What is a drawing of a giraffe called - giraffiti… Beryl
Delaney Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 4:49 PM
Fun one, Beryl: I like your word play on the final word. That will stick with me a long while. LOL SuZ
Edmonds  Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Suzanne, very much, pleased as punch that you found this fun… Beryl
Poet Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Beryl, your limerick elegantly captures the playful essence of two giraffes stumbling upon a diner during their walk. Cool that long necks allow them to reach the food on the table, leading to a whimsical transformation as they indulge in the unique experience.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Sotto, Giraffe have to be fed, that day it was fortunate that they had long necks. It’s a fun contest and was fun to write this Limerick… Beryl
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