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A Ghost Arises

a ghost comes forth from the house of the dead, a rather unusual apparition – empty, desolate. a wraith so worn and frail, it barely seems there, as if suddenly thrust from its icy winter shade. it rises without sound, or maybe without voice, a solitaire and lonely shadow without form. I wonder what its purpose is here on this day and whatever its plans for during its stay. my fear aside, I can’t discern its intent, dark or light, heaven or hell, good or evil. I feel light and goodness on the one side and dark and evil as it turns its back to me. perchance it is here to help guide me, but where? It seems a lowly darkle, unenlightened and slow, but it turns with clear vision and song of light with an order of celestial beings from God’s land. I am edified. It is not the size or shape of the gift, but the inherent purpose and intent of its presence. I shall follow it with boldness, courage, and great expectations as it leads me into my sphere of scotophobia.
03/02/2021 Inspired by, but not entered in, the Ghost Poetry Contest sponsored by Julia Ward

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Date: 4/28/2021 6:20:00 PM
So many times I've started a poem and finished too late for a contest. But it's all about the journey and this one is still a winner.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/7/2022 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Eric. I don't always write for the contest, sometimes only for the inspiration I receive from the contest. I appreciate your visit and comments. Linda
Date: 3/6/2021 3:15:00 PM
Captivating poem, Linda. Enjoyed very much ~ Mala
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Mala :) I enjoyed your visit and nice comment. Linda
Date: 3/5/2021 12:57:00 PM
I wandered with you through your imagination, Linda. Splendidly done!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/5/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for the stroll Vijay, and for the nice comment. :) Linda
Date: 3/5/2021 12:40:00 PM
oh, love this!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/5/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thanks Jack! :) Linda
Date: 3/5/2021 9:12:00 AM
Now I know -- and probably numerous others -- that we either have or don't have 'scotophobia.' Great way to end a very interesting poem, Linda. I was so eager to find out about this unusual ghost... Teaches me (also) that 'not all ghosts are alike! ~ S. Terry O. Typer
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/5/2021 10:24:00 AM
Ha gw. It is my pedagogical mission as well as to entertain. ;) Thanks for stopping by with kind comments. Linda
Date: 3/5/2021 6:59:00 AM
Intriguing and haunting.. sighs of hope... breath of insight... lovely writing, God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/5/2021 7:34:00 AM
Many thanks for the visit and nice comments Gina. :) Linda
Date: 3/4/2021 6:30:00 PM
Neat poem Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/4/2021 6:53:00 PM
Many thanks for the visit and nice comment Jennifer. :) Linda
Date: 3/3/2021 7:11:00 AM
Very descriptive story and imagination... Linda...Hugs ~ Ani.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/3/2021 7:27:00 AM
Hi Ani! Thanks for visiting and commenting :) Linda
Date: 3/2/2021 2:43:00 PM
Your well wrought ghost story captivated me completely, Linda. Wonderful! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2021 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn. Always a pleasure to have you visit and make such nice comments. :) Linda
Date: 3/2/2021 2:01:00 PM
I love ghost stories. This one was fascinating.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2021 5:21:00 PM
Hi Victor :) Nice to see you again. Thanks for the nice comment. Linda
Date: 3/2/2021 1:59:00 PM
I like the poem Linda, especially "I wonder what its purpose is here on this day and whatever its plans for during its stay." John
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2021 5:20:00 PM
Hello John. Thank you very much for visiting and commenting :) Linda
Date: 3/2/2021 1:02:00 PM
This should be an entrant into Julia's contest; it is a winner in every way! It is really an amazing write!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2021 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Caren.:) Alas, the contest is closed. I appreciate your kind comments! Linda

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