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A Gentle Kiss

A gentle kiss, that I really must send To another true, and very dear friend Pucker up babe, it's coming your way And riding a storm, so it should be there today I licked my lips before I blew, so I know it's going to stick But with all the lightning, it might have a little kick So when it hits your lips, it might give off a little spark Now what started off as a gentle kiss, might be leaving you in the dark *For my sweety* *Elizabeth Wesley* Love,Dannyboy 8-24-12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 1:43:00 PM

Dan , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. pd

Red Fiery

Date: 12/17/2012 9:03:00 PM

I am sure ,,this is one of ur best...I consider it. you should write more and more like these...so energetic

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/11/2012 3:49:00 PM

Just beautiful Dan... :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/4/2012 5:04:00 PM

absolutely awesome ;}

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/11/2012 5:27:00 AM

This is such a sweet write Dan :) enjoyed poking around your gems this afternoon!

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/1/2012 2:50:00 AM

Oh you are doing lots of kissing lol. Very cute and so catchie - Shaz

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/25/2012 2:55:00 AM

Well I'll say this is cute ;}

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/5/2012 9:44:00 PM

well, one of mine just smacked your cheek sweet man! Oh Dano, another day.... without friends what would it be? great dedication kiss in the air for your dear friend Elizabeth :) take good care, God bless you, Cindy

Louis Rams

Date: 8/30/2012 7:14:00 PM

elizabeth received it and she is jumping with joy because she received it from a romantic young dannyboy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 9:19:00 PM

ooh la la, and I see Lizzy just loved this. SO CUTE.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/28/2012 1:29:00 PM

Sweetness laced with humour....this is Priceless! Hugs

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/27/2012 2:42:00 AM

Awww, sweet. What starts off as a gentle kiss ends up in sparks. A lightning kiss, the best sort. Well-written, Dan. :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/26/2012 6:22:00 PM

great kiss Dan lol,smacked Elizabeth right out of her shoe,lol

Kasim Ishmael

Date: 8/26/2012 3:28:00 PM

like it my friend,sorry i been away from soup for so long not have time to read poems,being very busy ,thank u for reading my poems my friend,take care dan,

Ivy Vresk

Date: 8/26/2012 9:08:00 AM

how wonderful way to say hi to a friend,thank you dear Dan,and thank you for stopping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/26/2012 6:29:00 AM

Oh wow Dan...this was another wonderful kiss poem of yours...I really love your since of humor as well... :) Good luck in the contest!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/25/2012 11:57:00 AM

That's abdorabibble! See, I can't even type right. Really cute Dan! Haha Always, Laura :D

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/24/2012 6:27:00 PM

How delightful. Very nice indeed! Cynthia

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/24/2012 5:52:00 PM

A fave anda 10 of course.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/24/2012 5:50:00 PM

Well, there aren't words to describe what this does to me but maybe I can say I got it smack dab in the right place! It doesn't sound too gentle with all those sparks but I can handle it and yours is on its way!*! The fires burn bright and that alright as long as there's control and we leave out the bite! Woo hoo Danny boy, you're the one :)