Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

A Gentle Kiss

A gentle kiss,
 that I really must send
To another true,
 and very dear friend
Pucker up babe,
it's coming your way
And riding a storm,
so it should be there today
I licked my lips before I blew,
 so I know it's going to stick
But with all the lightning,
it might have a little kick
So when it hits your lips,
 it might give off a little spark
Now what started off as a gentle kiss,
 might be leaving you in the dark 



*For my sweety*
*Elizabeth Wesley* 
Love,Dannyboy
8-24-12

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Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2013 at 1:43 PM Dan , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. pd

Red Fiery December 17, 2012 at 9:03 PM I am sure ,,this is one of ur best...I consider it. you should write more and more like these...so energetic

Kerry Singleton December 11, 2012 at 3:49 PM Just beautiful Dan... :)

Debbie Duncan November 4, 2012 at 5:04 PM absolutely awesome ;}

Wilma Neels October 11, 2012 at 5:27 AM This is such a sweet write Dan :) enjoyed poking around your gems this afternoon!

Shaz Cheesman October 1, 2012 at 2:50 AM Oh you are doing lots of kissing lol. Very cute and so catchie - Shaz

Debbie Duncan September 25, 2012 at 2:55 AM Well I'll say this is cute ;}

Cindy Cayton September 5, 2012 at 9:44 PM well, one of mine just smacked your cheek sweet man! Oh Dano, another day.... without friends what would it be? great dedication kiss in the air for your dear friend Elizabeth :) take good care, God bless you, Cindy

Louis Rams August 30, 2012 at 7:14 PM elizabeth received it and she is jumping with joy because she received it from a romantic young dannyboy.

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2012 at 9:19 PM ooh la la, and I see Lizzy just loved this. SO CUTE.

Cecilia Macfarlane August 28, 2012 at 1:29 PM Sweetness laced with humour....this is Priceless! Hugs

Delysia Hendricks August 27, 2012 at 2:42 AM Awww, sweet. What starts off as a gentle kiss ends up in sparks. A lightning kiss, the best sort. Well-written, Dan. :)

Richard Palmer August 26, 2012 at 6:22 PM great kiss Dan lol,smacked Elizabeth right out of her shoe,lol

Kasim Ishmael August 26, 2012 at 3:28 PM like it my friend,sorry i been away from soup for so long not have time to read poems,being very busy ,thank u for reading my poems my friend,take care dan,

Ivy Vresk August 26, 2012 at 9:08 AM how wonderful way to say hi to a friend,thank you dear Dan,and thank you for stopping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script August 26, 2012 at 6:29 AM Oh wow Dan...this was another wonderful kiss poem of yours...I really love your since of humor as well... :) Good luck in the contest!!

Laura Breidenthal August 25, 2012 at 11:57 AM That's abdorabibble! See, I can't even type right. Really cute Dan! Haha Always, Laura :D

Cynthia Alvez August 24, 2012 at 6:27 PM How delightful. Very nice indeed! Cynthia

Elizabeth Wesley August 24, 2012 at 5:52 PM A fave anda 10 of course.

Elizabeth Wesley August 24, 2012 at 5:50 PM Well, there aren't words to describe what this does to me but maybe I can say I got it smack dab in the right place! It doesn't sound too gentle with all those sparks but I can handle it and yours is on its way!*! The fires burn bright and that alright as long as there's control and we leave out the bite! Woo hoo Danny boy, you're the one :)

Ilene Bauer August 24, 2012 at 12:50 PM very sweet and tender! nice one! Dan Kearley August 24, 2012 at 1:41 PM Thank you,Ilene.. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2012 at 11:48 AM Sweet kiss for sweet Elizabeth, Dan - Lovely written....hope she get "a little kick" - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise :<) Dan Kearley August 24, 2012 at 1:40 PM Me tooooooo! :o) Thanks...Your next! Ha,ha...Hee,hee -f.e.f. oxox

Cory Long August 24, 2012 at 8:39 AM this is great! I really enjoyed your poem today.. Have a great day.. soup mail.. cory Dan Kearley August 24, 2012 at 1:36 PM Thank you very much! :o)