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A Garland Girl

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A sweet smile underneath a garland crown, With a floral fragrance all around… Effortless efflorescence within the ethereal eye, Upon a perennial posture with a seeding shy. A frolicking flora before the quizzical Queen, Stands a garland girl amidst the gardens green… Freshful flowers illuminating with innocence, Hearts aflutter with bashful blissfulness. April.26.2019 A Garland Poetry Sponsored by: Julia Ward Honorable Mention...Thank You

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Winged Warrior

Date: 8/18/2019 12:32:00 PM

Poem...a piece of writing that partakes of the nature of both speech and song that is nearly always rhythmical, usually metaphorical, and often exhibits such formal elements as meter, rhyme, and stanzaic structure... Metaphor...a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/25/2019 8:38:00 AM

Lovely, WW. So fresh! Congrats.

Julia Ward

Date: 5/25/2019 5:22:00 AM

I like the first two lines, but be careful with sense - the lines three and four have no meaning - "seeding shy" - what's that? Flora does not frolic. Blissfulness is not bashful.

Silent One

Date: 4/29/2019 2:30:00 PM

Nice alliteration and beautiful imagery..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2019 9:00:00 AM

Such a cute poem describing the pure innocence of a child - a wonderful write ^WW^ a fav. for me! Poetry hugs, Jen.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/26/2019 7:18:00 PM

A flower holding flowers...A lovely write...All the best WW

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2019 3:18:00 PM

This poem is superb WW! She could be here in Hawaii. Our school youth dress with flowers like this on May Day which we call lei day! I love it! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/26/2019 2:02:00 PM

Lovely alliteration and imagery, WW.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2019 1:26:00 PM

Wow! This is beautiful. Just perfect. I like hearing it too. Well written WW :)