A Garden Ravaged

my life is weather-stained with years
a garden ravaged . . . 
since a child I have been collecting scars
s c a r s  that will never heal
and storms shake the ocean of my sleep
the waves of time keep rolling over me endlessly
o, scars are the  p a t h  to the soul I heard
and my  S O U L  is a labyrinth
of jagged, sharp pieces
and my  d r e a m s  are flowers that have died
my scars a long chain of heavy lead
yet, I drink from the deep blue sky each day . . . 
though the rare herb, happiness, hides away from me
my heart a window open but a door firmly closed
I dwell amid the dregs of past sorrows
that hang from  d r i p p i n g  branches
in the grey woods of my mind. . . 

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May 12, 2020

Edit from September 7, 2018

Poetry/Free Verse/A Garden Ravaged
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All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Submitted to Brian's Choice A Contest
sponsor, Brian Strand

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/14/2020 11:05:00 AM
Congrats Constance--you do capture sadness well....
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:34:00 PM
LJ, thanks for the congrats, you may have noticed capturing sadness is my forte _Constance
Date: 5/12/2020 2:19:00 PM
Pain and scars you write of so deeply that only someone so affected can do. Good luck DH.
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Jeanne, yes, true I do have a lot of pain and scars to write about, thanks for visiting _Constance
Date: 5/12/2020 2:01:00 PM
Only you can make such pain so eloquently beautiful. Gorgeous penning. Good luck in Brian's contest, a winner for me. xomo
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Maureen, thanks so much for the visit and the compliment _Constance
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