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A Garden Ravaged

my life is weather-stained with years a garden ravaged . . . since a child I have been collecting scars s c a r s that will never heal and storms shake the ocean of my sleep the waves of time keep rolling over me endlessly o, scars are the p a t h to the soul I heard and my S O U L is a labyrinth of jagged, sharp pieces and my d r e a m s are flowers that have died my scars a long chain of heavy lead yet, I drink from the deep blue sky each day . . . though the rare herb, happiness, hides away from me my heart a window open but a door firmly closed I dwell amid the dregs of past sorrows that hang from d r i p p i n g branches in the grey woods of my mind. . . _______________________________ May 12, 2020 Edit from September 7, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/A Garden Ravaged Copyright Protected, ID 20-1251-658-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to Brian's Choice A Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 5/14/2020 11:05:00 AM
Congrats Constance--you do capture sadness well....
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:34:00 PM
LJ, thanks for the congrats, you may have noticed capturing sadness is my forte _Constance
Date: 5/12/2020 2:19:00 PM
Pain and scars you write of so deeply that only someone so affected can do. Good luck DH.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Jeanne, yes, true I do have a lot of pain and scars to write about, thanks for visiting _Constance
Date: 5/12/2020 2:01:00 PM
Only you can make such pain so eloquently beautiful. Gorgeous penning. Good luck in Brian's contest, a winner for me. xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Maureen, thanks so much for the visit and the compliment _Constance

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