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A Garden Flower For My Love

Meandering around my garden
I invite my love to smell the fragrance
And hope for the best.
I must pick the best flora on earth.
For love says it with flowers.
But….
Does she still love me?
Or has our love dissipated
In the dank mist of never land?

Would she choose some forget-me-nots?
Or an elegant bunch of jasmine?
Better still white carnations should suit her more.
Shall I add some pink daffodils, a new beginning?
Or a cluster of cherry blossom
That should send her to paradise.

I find a ruby red rose that smells like heaven
And give it to her with a smile.
She cannot help but smell the flower, 
Oh, how wonderfully perfumed!
But suddenly I hear her yell in pain.
A small thorn pierces her finger,
Softly red blood oozes out.

Let me prick mine I suggest,
We will mix our blood
And then we will be forever in love.
She smiles and puts some blood on my lips
And give me the most passionate kiss
That sends me up to paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hawkins Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:15 PM
Blood Lovers. This poem is full of passion, Romance and eternal love. I agree with Sotto your Poem should make POTD. Thank you, Victor
Bayles Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Different kinds of flowers, different kinds of love. But the last stanza is wonderful.
Skelly Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Loving the catalogue of blossoms that bloom in your poem can visualise their beauty, so uplifting...Delice
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Looking for the perfect message in a bouquet! Great!
M  Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Love your beautiful poem Victor ….King Of You know What !!! Cuddles Debx
George Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Intensely passionate and romantic. Such a lovely poem. Twlo hearts melded together in beauty and fragrance !
Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Oh, such beautiful poetry Victor, finishing with a superb finale. Love the tour around your garden, the sentiment, and yes paradise. harry
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Oh my Victor. This is quite the romantic love poem. Just beautiful! hugs, Linda
Y. Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 10:53 AM
WoW! Victor, Love is air in the garden. I echo what Andrea said. I enjoyed your well written write from start to finish. Have a great day-Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Love in a garden should have been the title of this one. Very nice, Victor
Seeker Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 5:09 AM
A vampire like twist but of vampires in love! enjoyed! You always manage a surprising twist in your narration, Victor.
Tor Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Love is in the air Victor. Nicely written my friend. You have a romantic side that is brought out in your Poetry. Excellent my friend...
Kitchin Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:24 AM
Victor, a sweet poem full of love and romance!
Messina Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:47 AM
Now that's love...maybe a little vampirism involved here (lol) Lovely poem, Victor.
Ricci Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Victor Victor Victor. My Goodness, you have outdone yourself. Just look at what you executed. This is very much poetry in my eyes. Be proud. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. This was a wonderful way to start the day. (smile)
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October 24, 2022 at 1:28 AM
A lovely floral tribute to your love Victor, roses bloom in heaven I guess, red for love eternally blessed… Belle
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 8:38 PM
A garden full of flowers with your beloved there a blessing.. Sight.. One day. Blessing my friend
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Creative one for sure. Somewhat in line with Halloween. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 11:00 AM
A charming story, Victor. You know how to strum romance in beautiful poetry. Excellent as always.
Buehler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Apparently, red roses says it quite well. An enchanting glimpse of the garden of love. :)
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:05 AM
- Flowers have their own language... so does love, Victor :) - A wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs
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October 23, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Victor, your writing and setting are so wonderfully charming. This is an excellent tutorial for appreciating the function of the many types of flowers. Your metaphors, which are replete with a wonderful odor and associated with magnificent diction, bring forth a poem that ought to be a Poem of the Day.
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