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A Gal Named Trudy

There once was a gal named Trudy,
who was extremely snooty.
Walking head up, nose in air,
she didn't have a care,
till she tripped and fell on her booty.

9/15/16

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2016

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September 19, 2016 at 9:01 AM

Rudy Trudy's cheeks were ruby. Well done.

September 23, 2016 at 10:24 AM

Ha ha! Thanks for commenting, Jean!

Joseph P. DiMino

September 16, 2016 at 10:20 AM

Ouch! But sometimes the only way to humble us. Love it!

September 23, 2016 at 10:23 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Connie Marcum Wong

September 15, 2016 at 10:14 PM

This made me burst into laughter Kim...a perfect Limerick. Loved It! I have to fave it for when I need a good laugh! ; ) 7

September 23, 2016 at 10:23 AM

Thank you, Connie. So glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2016 at 9:19 PM

GREAT rhyme and limerick beat, Kim. I love seeing a poem of yours brand new!

September 23, 2016 at 10:22 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Such a sweet thing to say.

Eileen Manassian

September 15, 2016 at 5:33 PM

HA HA! Serves her right, I guess. Being snooty doesn't pay. Good one, Kim. Hugs

September 23, 2016 at 10:21 AM

Thanks, Eileen!

September 15, 2016 at 5:30 PM

ha! very cute, kim! she got what she deserved...

September 23, 2016 at 10:21 AM

Thanks, Ilene!

September 15, 2016 at 11:34 AM

ha ha ha great fun here Kim but not for Trudy of course:-) hugs Jan xx

September 23, 2016 at 10:20 AM

Thanks, Jan!

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