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A Frosty Dance

there is a silence held by the evening snow settled outside the window waiting the next gust to lift this spirit in flow a frosty dance to let go Heidi Sands 1/18/24 (C)opyright

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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/19/2024 10:52:00 AM
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Got my dancing shoes on, Heidi, "waiting for the next gust" to carry me into pirouettes of winter reveries! This is just delightful and takes me back to many snow filled winter nights of silence and solitude. Nicely done. Hope you are doing better every day. Continued prayers. Blessings of renewed health and happiness to you!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
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That is great ! Get those dancing shoes on. Do you like to ice skate too? I like both. I appreciate your kind comment and support. I am doing better. Thank you :)
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Date: 1/19/2024 10:15:00 AM
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Dear heidi, i loved reading this. So well woven and flows seamlessly too: especially the opening line is brilliant! Silence held by evening snow, a line that would stay in my mind for a very long time! Pleasure always visiting your page. Sending you light always
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2024 10:18:00 AM
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Thank you so much for your kind comment and light. I appreciate your positive feedback. :)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/19/2024 10:04:00 AM
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I like "silence held by evening snow", Wonderful write Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2024 10:16:00 AM
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Thanks Joseph . Hugs :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2024 3:54:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, yes the snowfall does a dance when it is falling to the ground. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 4:28:00 AM
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Hello Heidi, it snowed last night. The snow ploughs were out in the early morning. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2024 4:16:00 PM
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Yes it does Darlene. Thank you for your comment. Hugs :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/18/2024 2:37:00 PM
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Love the imagery in your verse Heidi, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2024 2:42:00 PM
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Thank you Tom. We have had a lot of snow lately and frigid Temps will be here on the weekend. I am doing ok. I hope you are too! :)

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