A Friend From Toyland

At eighteen months, I was too young
For such a fragile dolly. 
I received her on my second Christmas 
My indulgent parents’ folly.

I don’t remember getting “Nelly”.
She just had always been there.
She’d sit so quietly in my lap
As I rocked in my rocking chair.

She had big, blue, sleeping eyes,
And was dressed in silk and lace.
Brown curls of real human hair 
Surrounded her lovely face. 

She was a big part of my childhood,
While other toys came and went.
Her nice silk dress turned into shreds
As careless days we spent. 

She sits now in a nice new case
With replaced clothes and hair.
This faithful companion of my youth
Deserves the best of care.


For Linda Marie's contest  won 4th
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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Joyce
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January 4, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Hi Joyce. Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Joy to you and 'Nelly'. Eamon
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:27 AM
nicely done! applause to you on your win :) nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 9:59 PM
Ah, that sweet Nelly is probably very valuable today but even more so for sentimental reasons. Congratulations, Joyce.
Mannan Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 8:15 PM
I really love this one Joyce. Many congratulations for this success
La France Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations, Joyce on your win with this pretty poem~~
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Congrats Joyce on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list just posted tonight luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 8:25 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Joyce .. good luck and happy holidays with luv..
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December 16, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Joyce, it's so nice that Nelly had a makeover. Maybe you can let your grandchildren play with her. I love the way you describe how your parents didn't give much thought to bestowing such a fragile doll on a todler. Wish you could post a picture of her! Hope you are enjoying the holiday season, dear friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Joyce. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 3:26 AM
awhhh.. how sweetly portrayed with lots of visceral images... hello to nelly and good winning wishes in the contest, joyce.. hugggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM
lovely, good luck in the contest
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