A Friend From Toyland

At eighteen months, I was too young
For such a fragile dolly. 
I received her on my second Christmas 
My indulgent parents’ folly.

I don’t remember getting “Nelly”.
She just had always been there.
She’d sit so quietly in my lap
As I rocked in my rocking chair.

She had big, blue, sleeping eyes,
And was dressed in silk and lace.
Brown curls of real human hair 
Surrounded her lovely face. 

She was a big part of my childhood,
While other toys came and went.
Her nice silk dress turned into shreds
As careless days we spent. 

She sits now in a nice new case
With replaced clothes and hair.
This faithful companion of my youth
Deserves the best of care.


For Linda Marie's contest  won 4th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/5/2011 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:29:00 AM
Hi Joyce. Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Joy to you and 'Nelly'. Eamon
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Date: 1/4/2011 3:27:00 AM
nicely done! applause to you on your win :) nette
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:59:00 PM
Ah, that sweet Nelly is probably very valuable today but even more so for sentimental reasons. Congratulations, Joyce.
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Date: 1/3/2011 8:15:00 PM
I really love this one Joyce. Many congratulations for this success
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce on your win with this pretty poem~~
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:06:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list just posted tonight luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:25:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Joyce .. good luck and happy holidays with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 1:45:00 PM
Joyce, it's so nice that Nelly had a makeover. Maybe you can let your grandchildren play with her. I love the way you describe how your parents didn't give much thought to bestowing such a fragile doll on a todler. Wish you could post a picture of her! Hope you are enjoying the holiday season, dear friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Joyce. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/15/2010 3:26:00 AM
awhhh.. how sweetly portrayed with lots of visceral images... hello to nelly and good winning wishes in the contest, joyce.. hugggs, nette
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:40:00 PM
lovely, good luck in the contest
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