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A Fragile Boat

A fragile boat our transient existence seems to be

Sailing over the ocean of tears of grief and joy

Daily we are toiling on course our frail ship to keep 

By applying the precepts, God gave us to employ!









© Demetrios Trifiatis
    15 January 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 1/16/2021 7:40:00 PM
“ a frail ship” but I would not have it any other way. Lovely ink.
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Date: 1/15/2021 5:08:00 AM
A lovely quatrain, Demetrios. The boat in your photo--a metaphor for life's journey.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/15/2021 9:46:00 AM
Yes, it is a metaphor my friend but also a means of traveling ( metaphoras) Greek word which means both things! Thank you!
Date: 1/15/2021 1:32:00 AM
I hope your ship of life meets calm seas and gives you safe harbour in stormy weather. Have a great weekend Demetrios. Tom
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Date: 1/15/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for your wishes my dearest friend, Tom. With God's help that the remaining trip would be a calm one! Blessings
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