A Fox In the Henhouse

Meet the mother - old Miss Jenny
She gave birth to chicks aplenty
(Never dreamed she’d have so many)

But sly Wiley, a hungry fox
Was more threatening than the cocks
Tummy growling, he picked the pen’s locks

As her chicks began to shriek
Jenny pecked Wiley with her beak
And he was dancing chick to cheek

“Aaach!” Wiley cried out loud
As into his fur Jenny plowed
A fox in the hen house -- not allowed

The chicks were saved
They tauntingly waved
Fur a-flying, Wiley got shaved 

From the pen fur-free Wiley broke loose
Because Jenny’d cooked his goose
And it was too late to call a truce



*A children’s poem for Gwen’s “Dr. Seuss Is on the Loose” contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Witty and fun. Loved it! Congrats on you win.
Song Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:06 PM
This scored so high bc the story took off so fast and just rolled with utter excitement..There were 2 school-aged judges, 1 college student, and myself. All are very much Dr. Seuss fanatics. My personal favorite things about this poem were the monorhyming stanzas which I know were hard to pull off, and Jenny and Wiley dancing "chick to cheek"..superb imagination and word play! Thanks for taking your time to write for this Carolyn. Congrats! Love, Gwendolen
Dailey Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest. I enjoyed reading your Seuss. Mike
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Gwen's "Dr. Seuss" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 4:58 AM
congrats to you Carolyn, this is truly a wonderrful poem. harry
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Congratulaions Carolyn wil read to mey nephew later (he has chickens ) x
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on the win Carolyn. This is another great write I enjoyed reading.
Horne Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 2:05 PM
LOL, love this fun piece. We often hear foxes in the night now our neighbour has pet hens - they need Jenny to protect them
Austin Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Hooray! That wiley old fox got nailed. Was Jenny a goose? Geese are pretty damn tough. Whatever. I got a kick out of this one. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 3:05 PM
very cute and clever write.. good luck in Gwendolen's contest Carolyn.. want to send u s.m. but do not see the icon on this poem.. so will cfomment on an older poem about something important ..
Mister Roboto Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM
I gotta new favorite to add to my list of yours~ Nice, and smooth....Worthy of a Gigantic Smile....I love the expression, :Cooked his goose, or goose is cooked...both ways tickle my funny bone!
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Enjoyed this one..Yes, Dr. Seuss delights me and this one would have made the cut for one of his books..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..The last word weed was used because of the fact that Hummers feed on them as well as what we call flowers..Sara
Peranteau Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 7:18 PM
Awesome write Carolyn ! I read it and invited Noah to this read and of course he loved it ! And he sends his thanx as well...Oh..yes, he has those blue eyes, and about the loads of photos; trust me; they roll on ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week dear poet....much love, james
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 4:08 PM
No....a fox in the hen house--not allowed...no,no.no....CUT Carolyn. oxox love Anne-Lise
Scholtz Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 4:01 PM
This is a wonderful poem Carolyn, sure to be a winner. love Elizabeth
Loving Iii Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 3:24 PM
In favor of fox hunting I presume.
Sivey Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Ha ha, now this was a wondrous write my friend! You've done this contest with great skill Carolyn! You were accurate and fit everything together rather nicely! I love it! Great Work!!
Ball Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 2:42 PM
Cute as a button with great description. A fine one for a children's book. God Bless, JB
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