Andrea Dietrich Poet Sonnet

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A Foodie's Love Sonnet

Bowled over, kneading you, feeling sub-lime
from my head tomatoes. Hear my heart beet!
Eggcited, wonton you olive the thyme.
Donut you carrot all for me at yeast?

You’re one in a melon, sweet sugar pie,
forbidden fruit I find so appeeling.
Cherry on the cake, apple of my eye.
Has there bean love? Don’t berry the feeling.

It’s a big dill and takes two to mango.
I’d sacri-rice all because you compleat me.
You oat to love me. Peas, love miso!
Just food for thought. Chew that fat with your tea.

I have so mushroom in my heart for you.
A pizza your heart? Say yes, honey - DEW!


Dec. 28, 2017 for  Viv Wigley's Food Fight Poetry Contest

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Bryan Norton September 9, 2020 at 1:09 PM OK, so you do write like me sometimes. Or did you go first.

Jan Allison June 29, 2019 at 6:31 PM dropping back with my congrats again I would have placed this much higher the fun word play is awesome:-) hugs jan xx

Martin Braun November 27, 2018 at 5:09 AM So much fungi to read...

Keith O.J. Hunt January 26, 2018 at 5:41 PM Brilliantly unique...

Matthew Anish January 2, 2018 at 7:11 PM Very, very clever. Now tell me what you think of my attempt at humor! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Robert Warlov January 2, 2018 at 2:55 PM you've won my heart and a side of fries.

Line Gauthier January 2, 2018 at 1:51 PM What a brain gymnastics ! My head is throbbing. Too adorable. Well done, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Richard Evans December 31, 2017 at 2:29 PM Writing with a child's eye is writing indeed. Excellent poem.

Rhoda Tripp December 30, 2017 at 1:14 AM This is a fantastic write, Andrea. Congrats!

Jean Murray December 29, 2017 at 4:42 PM Superb Andrea. Congratulations.

Sandra Haight December 29, 2017 at 3:39 PM Amazing job, Andrea! Love it! Congrats on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs and Happy New Year! Sandra

Paul Callus December 29, 2017 at 1:30 PM An excellent creative and humorous Sonnet, Andrea!! A merited podium finish...thyme for celebrations...Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Dale Gregory Cozart December 29, 2017 at 11:18 AM How original and clever and funny!! This looks like a winner to me!

Akkina Downing December 29, 2017 at 11:10 AM Drea Drea, what a fun food fight! OMG this is so deliciously Fun and amazing! I love love love it :) hugs and smiles :)

Jennifer Walker December 29, 2017 at 8:59 AM Congrats on such an appealing poem. Made my mouth water at the same time l was laughing . I'm so in awe of your creativeness.

Silent One December 29, 2017 at 8:59 AM this is excellent especially the last two lines.. very creative and humorous... Queen of sonnets, is that not what I called you once...

Judith S December 29, 2017 at 7:43 AM Congratulations Andrea!! Truly deserving! This is one creative and exceptional write!! ~ Judy

Mike Gentile December 29, 2017 at 6:04 AM Congratulations to you, Andrea!!! Love the mushroom in my heart, hysterical xxoo

Joseph May December 29, 2017 at 4:32 AM Dropping back with my congrats!

Jan Allison December 29, 2017 at 3:06 AM oh what wonderful word play Andrea lol I can see why Viv loved this many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley December 29, 2017 at 1:42 AM Congrats, Andrea, a fine write, very clever and really in the spirit of things. Well done! Viv x

Supraja Kannan December 28, 2017 at 11:13 PM Wow wow and wow... No words ... You are a genius Andrea... Loved it totally...... Gr(eat)

Probir Gupta December 28, 2017 at 9:49 PM An expert wordsmith effortlessly plays with words ... We are entertained ... Great ...

Joseph May December 28, 2017 at 9:33 PM This is great Andrea..love the humor...hugs

Cheryl Hoffman December 28, 2017 at 9:08 PM Very cute and clever write for the contest Andrea! Good luck in it!~Che :)

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