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A Foodie's Love Sonnet

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Bowled over, kneading you, feeling sub-lime from my head tomatoes. Hear my heart beet! Eggcited, wonton you olive the thyme. Donut you carrot all for me at yeast? You’re one in a melon, sweet sugar pie, forbidden fruit I find so appeeling. Cherry on the cake, apple of my eye. Has there bean love? Don’t berry the feeling. It’s a big dill and takes two to mango. I’d sacri-rice all because you compleat me. You oat to love me. Peas, love miso! Just food for thought. Chew that fat with your tea. I have so mushroom in my heart for you. A pizza your heart? Say yes, honey - DEW! Dec. 28, 2017 for Viv Wigley's Food Fight Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/9/2020 1:09:00 PM
OK, so you do write like me sometimes. Or did you go first.
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Date: 6/29/2019 6:31:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats again I would have placed this much higher the fun word play is awesome:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2018 5:09:00 AM
So much fungi to read...
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Date: 1/26/2018 5:41:00 PM
Brilliantly unique...
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Date: 1/2/2018 7:11:00 PM
Very, very clever. Now tell me what you think of my attempt at humor! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:55:00 PM
you've won my heart and a side of fries.
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:51:00 PM
What a brain gymnastics ! My head is throbbing. Too adorable. Well done, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/31/2017 2:29:00 PM
Writing with a child's eye is writing indeed. Excellent poem.
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Date: 12/30/2017 1:14:00 AM
This is a fantastic write, Andrea. Congrats!
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Date: 12/29/2017 4:42:00 PM
Superb Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/29/2017 3:39:00 PM
Amazing job, Andrea! Love it! Congrats on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs and Happy New Year! Sandra
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Date: 12/29/2017 1:30:00 PM
An excellent creative and humorous Sonnet, Andrea!! A merited podium finish...thyme for celebrations...Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:18:00 AM
How original and clever and funny!! This looks like a winner to me!
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:10:00 AM
Drea Drea, what a fun food fight! OMG this is so deliciously Fun and amazing! I love love love it :) hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:59:00 AM
this is excellent especially the last two lines.. very creative and humorous... Queen of sonnets, is that not what I called you once...
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on such an appealing poem. Made my mouth water at the same time l was laughing . I'm so in awe of your creativeness.
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Date: 12/29/2017 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea!! Truly deserving! This is one creative and exceptional write!! ~ Judy
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations to you, Andrea!!! Love the mushroom in my heart, hysterical xxoo
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Date: 12/29/2017 4:32:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats!
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Date: 12/29/2017 3:06:00 AM
oh what wonderful word play Andrea lol I can see why Viv loved this many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2017 1:42:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea, a fine write, very clever and really in the spirit of things. Well done! Viv x
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Date: 12/28/2017 11:13:00 PM
Wow wow and wow... No words ... You are a genius Andrea... Loved it totally...... Gr(eat)
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:49:00 PM
An expert wordsmith effortlessly plays with words ... We are entertained ... Great ...
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:33:00 PM
This is great Andrea..love the humor...hugs
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:08:00 PM
Very cute and clever write for the contest Andrea! Good luck in it!~Che :)
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