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A Flower Perfect Beauty

Every flower bloom itself perfectly Even when no one sees it It still smells beautifully Shines brightly in the sun Gradually becomes calm Gradually more beautiful in the open It doesn't mind the world around you Fate always treats everyone fairly What comes, comes If beauty is within Then the years can't defeat.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/25/2025 11:14:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I just read your poem. flowers do have a perfect beauty. No matter how tall or short they are. Yes that is right they do not mind world around them. yes fate always treats everyone fairy. yes what comes comes. If the beauty is within That is right the years cxan not defeat the beauty. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2025 10:18:00 AM

Hello Hugo, yes outside beauty wanes on the outside. The inner beauty last a life time. Yes perfect love can be seen on the outside. Yes it has a heart that sees all of it. It also feels pain. and happiness. Sadness and joy. Yes good traits in life. Thank you Hugo.Much love here Hugo. /Darl;ene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 3/25/2025 7:42:00 PM

Beauty outside may wane, inside beauty last for a lifetime. However, what's within becomes the without. Perfect love can be seen outside, it's the heart that sees all of it. The manifestation, the happiness and the sadness are all exemplified in matters and in emotional forms. Good traits are points in life. I really appreciate for comment, Darlene. I love you more for this./Hugo.