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A Fling With the Elves

She was having a fling with the elves She would catch them alone by themselves Then behind Santa’s back She would hit the old sack She was lining them up by the twelves

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/27/2021 4:11:00 AM

Interesting work. Congratulations!

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/28/2021 11:33:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj!!’

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2021 9:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Mike , great limerick .

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/28/2021 11:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/26/2021 2:12:00 PM

Naughty but nice X! I loved your limerick Mike. I am happy to see it get a trophy podium win. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/26/2021 5:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie and Happy Holidays xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2021 7:52:00 PM

Hi Mike, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/25/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/24/2021 7:04:00 PM

Lol! Oh, so naughty! A great limerick, Mike. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/25/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan and Merry Christmas!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/24/2021 6:37:00 PM

Congrats!

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/25/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thanks Kim and Merry Christmas!!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2021 4:33:00 PM

My, my, she should get more sleep! LOL! Congrats, Mike! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/25/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Janice and a very Merry Christmas xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:12:00 PM

I still am not 100% sure I got the joke, but it sounded dirty and I am betting it means what I am thinking!! I liked the allusion to the 12 Dwarves when you wrote "lining them up by the 12's" Or was she making them into bowling pins to fling a bowling ball at. I kind of liked the possibility of fling having a double meaning here, and your limerick beat is outstanding. Congrats in my contest.

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/25/2021 1:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea and you can bet that she was lining them up to have her way with them and bowling had NOTHING to do with it!!! Merry Christmas xxoo

Charles Messina

Date: 12/18/2021 4:59:00 AM

LOL, Santa is going to have to send Rudolph and the rest of the deer off by themselves this year. Good one, Mike. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Charlie

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/19/2021 8:38:00 AM

Merry Christmas Charlie and thanks !!!