A Fish Fry

A FISH FRY

David Alan Garrick
1993


Alarms will ring while in the dark
That dog you hear is your own bark
A minute more would be so sweet
But thoughts lead to that porcelain seat

The clothes you found still on the floor
They’ve been there seems a year or more
That sleepy woman you just awoke
Is laughing cause your always broke

The car is packed, the boat is hitched
Your battery’s dead, now ain’t that rich
You call your buddy for a jump
And he’s still rolled up in a lump

Breakfast is waiting at the diner
Here comes daybreak, make it minor
The traffic has not started yet
This officer you’ve never met

The water looks so mighty fine
But you’re the fifth one back in line
Rumor says the fish are bitin’
Hope they cannot see the lightnin’

Chancin it just might pay off
The sun may shine and scare them off
You reach that spot you like so well
And find the bait’s at home; oh hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/14/2016 7:45:00 AM
Hi David. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 6/13/2016 1:22:00 PM
Excellent piece David, lovely rhyme and flow,enjoyed it,blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/2/2016 12:28:00 AM
Awesome, day out... David. SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2016 8:18:00 PM
what a great write, thanks for the laughs with this David.
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