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Is it Love a simple bowl of ice cream sweating from the heat cherries on the top huddled 'round and looking sweet two little wooden paddles pretend that they are spoons as we sit beneath the stars in the savor of the moon your lips are all I see as they caress them with a passion the cherries on your tongue in a delightful playful fashion with our eyes intent and focused in a stare of solemn trust Is this ice cream truly love or is it merely cherry lust

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Date: 8/21/2018 10:43:00 PM
G'day Jerry … it's really debatable isn't it Jerry, but only about what order - love follows ice cream and cherries or vice versa. Both will occur; maybe - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:35:00 AM
Just got to read this , Jerry. I love the delicate, lines in your poetry. Love or lust, there is elegance here. It's a 7 and a fav!
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:32:00 AM
Hello Jerry My Good Friend!! This is a most wonderful rhyme write. I find that the very interesting nature of your writes coupled always with you knack and feel for subtle humor is funny, compelling, and for me -- mesmerizing. You capture the reader's attention immediately here, and the last two verses here are the perfect ending. Outstanding!! 7 + FAV!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:05:00 AM
Oh...Jerry, Jerry. I love the way you write! A poet doesn't need to describe every little thing...a mere hint here and there is so much more attractive. This is WONDERFUL! 7 I am fav'ing it!
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:15:00 PM
I liked your poem and I love ice cream! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:29:00 PM
Definitely a poem to savour jerry -I was licking my lips reading this playful poem - now I'm dreaming of a bowl of ice cream!:-) hugs Jan xx7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/27/2015 9:01:00 PM
ooh I LOVE neopolitan icecream - I always save the chocolate part till last lol:-) hugs Jan xx