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A Fine Flavor between lines

Is it Love
a simple bowl of ice cream
sweating from the heat
cherries on the top
huddled 'round and looking sweet
two little wooden paddles
pretend that they are spoons
as we sit beneath the stars
in the savor of the moon
your lips are all I see
as they caress them with a passion 
the cherries on your tongue
in a delightful playful fashion 
with our eyes intent and focused
in a stare of solemn trust
Is this ice cream truly love
or is it merely cherry lust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/21/2018 10:43:00 PM
G'day Jerry … it's really debatable isn't it Jerry, but only about what order - love follows ice cream and cherries or vice versa. Both will occur; maybe - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:35:00 AM
Just got to read this , Jerry. I love the delicate, lines in your poetry. Love or lust, there is elegance here. It's a 7 and a fav!
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:32:00 AM
Hello Jerry My Good Friend!! This is a most wonderful rhyme write. I find that the very interesting nature of your writes coupled always with you knack and feel for subtle humor is funny, compelling, and for me -- mesmerizing. You capture the reader's attention immediately here, and the last two verses here are the perfect ending. Outstanding!! 7 + FAV!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:05:00 AM
Oh...Jerry, Jerry. I love the way you write! A poet doesn't need to describe every little thing...a mere hint here and there is so much more attractive. This is WONDERFUL! 7 I am fav'ing it!
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:15:00 PM
I liked your poem and I love ice cream! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:29:00 PM
Definitely a poem to savour jerry -I was licking my lips reading this playful poem - now I'm dreaming of a bowl of ice cream!:-) hugs Jan xx7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/27/2015 9:01:00 PM
ooh I LOVE neopolitan icecream - I always save the chocolate part till last lol:-) hugs Jan xx