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A Field In Winter

A field in winter frosted with fresh-fallen snow cloaks the mole, mouse, and magpie hunting in hunger. The hawk swoops down with keen eye to crash the feasting party.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/8/2023 1:38:00 PM

Quite creative, Linda, but also a touch melancholy. Fantastically written; the use of alliteration and vivid winter images does a fantastic job of capturing the season. Congratulations

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/8/2023 2:06:00 PM

Life's cycle Lasaad. Nature has her own idea of conservation. Thanks for stopping by! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/8/2023 12:59:00 PM

Darkness sheds light humor on the survival of the fittest, an admirable elimination process, Linda, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/8/2023 2:04:00 PM

Ah, the nature of nature. I'm thinking they should have dined in William. LOL

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/9/2023 1:35:00 PM

Very original and a little sad Linda. Wonderfully composed with splendid alliteration and imagery that paints this moment in winter! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for the new year.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/10/2023 1:43:00 PM

A little sad, but that is the way of Nature, yes? I appreciate you comments Sam. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings right back at you!

Terry Miller

Date: 1/6/2023 1:36:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this poem in a form I am unfamiliar with; well done.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/6/2023 6:20:00 AM

Thanks Terry. It's a fun form to try :) Have a good afternoon! :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/2/2023 5:39:00 PM

Wow, I can see this so clearly. Well written. :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/3/2023 6:37:00 AM

Many thanks Heidi. Nice to see you here! I appreciate your visit and comments! :)