Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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A Few More Hours

A few more hours
the world will count
a new year in 
a new year out

and here am I 
within your arms
I count the time
by all your charms

Our bodies sway
you hold me tight
the candles blaze
On New Year's Night

the fireworks
within your eyes
now scintillate 
along my thighs

we celebrate
the time draws near
that burst of love
to other sphere

the TV lights
dance to and fro
the countdown on
in passion glow

I see your face
bathed in desire
we're almost there
you rock me higher

And then as one
we burst in flame
"The New Year's come"
we both exclaim!!

What better place
for you and me
than in the throes
of ecstasy!!!

You hear me sigh
and sweetly say,
"My New Year's joy
is here to stay.""

Eileen Manassian

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CayCay Godwin January 4, 2016 at 1:50 PM Wouldn't this work in the, oh, I forget the name of it, but the Greek Poem Contest of few syllables? It would be quite a contender. A delighting and exciting read ... CayCay Eileen Manassian January 4, 2016 at 1:56 PM Oh! Thanks, dear....I've already entered one for that. :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux January 2, 2016 at 8:52 AM An ooh la la New Year, coming and going at the same time! Eileen Manassian January 2, 2016 at 8:57 AM Yes....that was the idea. Thanks for the visit, dear....

Paul Callus January 1, 2016 at 4:23 PM A passionate firework display that heralds in another romantic year, Eileen! ~ Wishing you and all close to your heart a happy and blessed new year! Hugs *~* paul Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 9:32 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, Paul. :) It does my heart good to see you here. I wish you and yours every blessing.....Appassionata.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs January 1, 2016 at 8:55 AM How sensual and romantic, great poem, you painted a vivid picture. Have a Blessed and Happy New Year! Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 9:41 AM Sensual and romantic is the way I roll, dear. Thanks for the visit....hugs

White Sage December 31, 2015 at 8:42 PM A nice way to celebrate, wished i was there to feed on the view...nice write Eileen Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 6:00 AM Thank you...WS. Very lovely comment.

Kp Nunez December 31, 2015 at 8:14 PM :-) Better way to celebrate than fireworks display. Hi Eileen! Here today just to read/reply and visit some. Wishing you the best this holiday season and great things for 2016! Blessings. Kim Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 6:02 AM Yes.....I've seen you up and about. Thanks for taking the time to visit, dear. Wish you all the best for the New Year...

Edward Ebbs December 31, 2015 at 6:48 PM Whoo hoo...umm....like Jan said, lovely write, congrats, Happy New Year :) Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 6:05 AM Your comment brought a smile...thank you. Wishing you all the best in the New Year....

Jan Allison December 31, 2015 at 6:38 PM oooh the queen of passion blazes into 2016 - lovely sensual write Eileen. Happy new Year:-) hugs Jan xx Eileen Manassian January 1, 2016 at 6:05 AM Internal fireworks beat them all, sweetie. Hugs to you...