Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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A Fervent Plea

My heart is all in; fully submerged in the depth...
of your heart's ocean. I'm all yours! I've lowered...
all my defenses. Let us walk through life together,
hand in hand; please never let go! Don't leave me...
teetering on the precipice of madness.


STRAND PICK 5,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date submitted: 04/09/2020

Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and submitted: 08/24/2019

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Constance La France August 31, 2019 at 9:51 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely Verse~ Edward Ibeh September 1, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thank you so very much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most appreciated.

Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:55 PM I love it, this is a reflection of true love and loyalty. Great job, loved it congrats :)-luloo Edward Ibeh August 29, 2019 at 2:10 PM Thank you, Lu:-) Glad you loved it!

John Gondolf August 29, 2019 at 7:22 AM Congrats on your win, Edward, I enjoyed your verse, a tender plea of the heart. all the best. John Edward Ibeh August 29, 2019 at 2:10 PM Thank you, John!:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2019 at 3:22 AM - "Let us walk through life together" ... a beautiful wish, Edward - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Edward Ibeh August 29, 2019 at 5:58 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 29, 2019 at 12:44 AM Great win, Edward. Congrats. Edward Ibeh August 29, 2019 at 5:57 AM Coming from one of the true PS greats, it means a lot! Thank you, Subimal:-)

Jeanne Mcgee August 28, 2019 at 7:24 PM congratulations Edward, on your nice win. Edward Ibeh August 28, 2019 at 7:39 PM Thank you, Jeanne:-)

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2019 at 3:51 PM How romantic is this! A beautiful poem, Edward. Edward Ibeh August 24, 2019 at 7:40 PM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)