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A Fervent Plea

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My heart is all in; fully submerged in the depth...
of your heart's ocean. I'm all yours! I've lowered...
all my defenses. Let us walk through life together,
hand in hand; please never let go! Don't leave me...
teetering on the precipice of madness.
STRAND PICK 5,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date submitted: 04/09/2020 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and submitted: 08/24/2019

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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2019 9:51:00 PM
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Edward, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely Verse~
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2019 7:34:00 AM
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Thank you so very much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most appreciated.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:55:00 PM
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I love it, this is a reflection of true love and loyalty. Great job, loved it congrats :)-luloo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM
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Thank you, Lu:-) Glad you loved it!
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 7:22:00 AM
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Congrats on your win, Edward, I enjoyed your verse, a tender plea of the heart. all the best. John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM
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Thank you, John!:-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2019 3:22:00 AM
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- "Let us walk through life together" ... a beautiful wish, Edward - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 5:58:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2019 12:44:00 AM
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Great win, Edward. Congrats.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 5:57:00 AM
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Coming from one of the true PS greats, it means a lot! Thank you, Subimal:-)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/28/2019 7:24:00 PM
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congratulations Edward, on your nice win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2019 7:39:00 PM
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Thank you, Jeanne:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2019 3:51:00 PM
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How romantic is this! A beautiful poem, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2019 7:40:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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