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A Fervent Plea

My heart is all in; fully submerged in the depth...
of your heart's ocean. I'm all yours! I've lowered...
all my defenses. Let us walk through life together,
hand in hand; please never let go! Don't leave me...
teetering on the precipice of madness.


STRAND PICK 5,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date submitted: 04/09/2020

Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and submitted: 08/24/2019

Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2019

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Constance La France Date: 8/31/2019 9:51:00 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely Verse~ Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 9/1/2019 7:34:00 AM Thank you so very much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most appreciated.

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/29/2019 12:55:00 PM I love it, this is a reflection of true love and loyalty. Great job, loved it congrats :)-luloo Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM Thank you, Lu:-) Glad you loved it!

John Gondolf Date: 8/29/2019 7:22:00 AM Congrats on your win, Edward, I enjoyed your verse, a tender plea of the heart. all the best. John Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM Thank you, John!:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2019 3:22:00 AM - "Let us walk through life together" ... a beautiful wish, Edward - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/29/2019 5:58:00 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/29/2019 12:44:00 AM Great win, Edward. Congrats. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/29/2019 5:57:00 AM Coming from one of the true PS greats, it means a lot! Thank you, Subimal:-)

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/28/2019 7:24:00 PM congratulations Edward, on your nice win. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/28/2019 7:39:00 PM Thank you, Jeanne:-)

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2019 3:51:00 PM How romantic is this! A beautiful poem, Edward. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 8/24/2019 7:40:00 PM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)