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My heart is all in; fully submerged in the depth...
of your heart's ocean. I'm all yours! I've lowered...
all my defenses. Let us walk through life together,
hand in hand; please never let go! Don't leave me...
teetering on the precipice of madness.
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and submitted: 08/24/2019

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Date: 8/31/2019 9:51:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely Verse~
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 8/29/2019 12:55:00 PM
I love it, this is a reflection of true love and loyalty. Great job, loved it congrats :)-luloo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Lu:-) Glad you loved it!
Date: 8/29/2019 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Edward, I enjoyed your verse, a tender plea of the heart. all the best. John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, John!:-)
Date: 8/29/2019 3:22:00 AM
- "Let us walk through life together" ... a beautiful wish, Edward - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 8/29/2019 12:44:00 AM
Great win, Edward. Congrats.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 5:57:00 AM
Coming from one of the true PS greats, it means a lot! Thank you, Subimal:-)
Date: 8/28/2019 7:24:00 PM
congratulations Edward, on your nice win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne:-)
Date: 8/24/2019 3:51:00 PM
How romantic is this! A beautiful poem, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)