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 Father Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Silent One

A Father's Relationship

Father what a very special name,
but the name daddy is extra special.
The man who was wise said,
always tell the truth and never lie,
be honest with all mankind.                                                            
Always act and look like a lady.
Every Saturday I loved going skating. 
I rented my skates,
but this week was going to be different.
He came out with a skate box in hand,                                                                    
he had this all well planned out.                                                                                               
I opened the skate box up,                                                                                                                                                                                                      a box filled with love,                                                                                                   
My new skates fit like a glove. 
Daddy the one who taught me how to ride a bike,
then how to drive a car. 
The day my dad handed me the car keys,    
he also handed me a coin.                                    
He said,                                                                  
put this in your shoe and never take it out.                 
If you need help,                                                   
you have this coin to call me at home.
Daddy was my helper with school work.
Guess you might say, 
we both graduated that summer night.
On my wedding day you gave me away,
then we danced and laughed all night.
After all you taught me how to dance.
Then I walked away to a new home. 
You will always be in my heart,
now gone to heaven but never forgotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 12:10 PM
"2 Place" ~ "A Father's Relationship" ~ Date Written:6/1/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet..............
One Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 2:05 PM
So many beautiful memories, you were lucky to have such a great father.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 4:26 PM
This one reads like an awesome dad who loved you very much and showed it by teaching and telling you about the important things in life. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I don't know if it is for a contest, but if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Glad you enjoyed this true story. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life for a contest. I still miss him so much. Have a Blessed Day writing away................
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:28 PM
I love your poem. It’s full of warm memories like walking down the aisle with dad. You should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 12:00 PM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Also Thanks for your, Good luck. Glad you love this true story. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. I still miss him so much. Have a Blessed Day writing away................
Sands Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 7:18 AM
This is so special Paula. Those memories held close in your heart last forever. Your loving father is nice to hear about. Blessings :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Glad you enjoyed this true story. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. Yes, great memories last forever. They are the best kind to have. I still miss him so much. Hugs... Have a Blessed Day writing away................
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:38 AM
- Many good memories of your lovely father, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Also Thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed this true story. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. Yes, great memories are the best kind to have. I still miss him so much. Hugs... Have a Blessed Day writing away................
Rodgers Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:12 AM
Hi Paula, Oh my going from Saturday skating to the handing over of car keys, is just like flipping through a cherished family photo album. It brought a very real lump to my throat. Watching my three daughters step through those exact same milestones over the years, the wobbly bike rides, the graduation nights, the bittersweet joy of a wedding dance has been the absolute privilege of my life. I also love the simple admission that "we both graduated that summer night"; it speaks volumes about how deeply a parent's spirit is entangled in their child's journey. Such an honest and tender memory. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:53 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Glad you enjoyed this true story.  I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. I was very blessed to have him. He was one is a million with some great memories. I still miss him so much. Have a Blessed Day writing away................ 
Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 5:57 AM
Awwn thats so sweet, your father sounds like a great daddy! Did you call him daddy? You were blessed with a wonderful father figure, this made my soul warm, reading it. Best wishes! Sending you light always
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:49 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Also Thanks for your, Best wishes. Glad you found this to be, so sweet. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. Yes, I was very blessed. He was one is a million. My mom was another story. I still miss him so much but not her. Have a Blessed Day writing away................ 
M  Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 8:34 PM
A wonderful tribute to your dad Paula…..such special memories! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Glad you found this to be, A wonderful tribute to your dad. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. Yes, very special memories. He was one is a million. I still miss him so much. Have a Blessed Day writing away................ 
Edmonds  Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 4:01 PM
Paula, that’s a beautiful tribute poem to your late father. What a wonderful father you had, you were truly blessed… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:43 AM
Great you came to read/write. "Thank You." Glad you found this to be, a beautiful tribute poem to your late father. I enjoyed bringing "A Father's Relationship" to life. Yes, I was very blessed to have him. He was one is a million. I still miss him so much. Have a Blessed Day writing away................ 
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 3:08 PM
"A Father's Relationship" ~ Date Written:6/1/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet..............
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